| Reviews for Poisoned Rose |
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   cullenisabella chapter 12 . 8/2/2011 Once again, happy birthday! I loved this chapter, it was nice. To answer your questions from the author's note... well, albeit I'd read your stories even if the characters' names weren't taken from Twilight, I'm not sure you'd get this "amount"of reviews. It's your choice, but if you want reviews, you should write Twilight fanfiction. Hm... I don't remember the second question and because my phone won't allow me to have more than one tab, I'll skip it. The third question... why do you think you should delete your other stories? I believe you should keep them. Seriously. Okay, that's enough rambling for tonight (2 AM). :) Love, Monica |
| nassarie chapter 1 . 7/30/2011 Sorry, I forgot to review when I read your I really like your idea and the story is going along really well. Though you should proof read once your done with a chapter so it will minimize your spelling errors or Mircosoft, trust me you're not the only one who misspells a lot of words. (Me) And also you should express the characters feelings more like when Alice suddenly introduced herself to Bella. Tell the readers how she felt at that moment when a strange girl suddenly came up to her. Think about how you would feel if that happened to you. But overall, it a good story keep it up! :) |
| treena-ivy-carter chapter 12 . 7/30/2011 Happy Birthday...well early birthday... it still counts. D Tree |
| k80cue chapter 10 . 7/25/2011 Hi Have just caught up with this story again (had previously read upto chapter 4). I was feeling a bit confused with the story but now I have read chapters 5 - 10 I understand it a bit better. I feel sorry for what Edward has been forced to do and wonder how he is going to explain what happened to Bella. I cant help but think that if he kills James and Jane that he will lose any chance he has of Bella understanding why he set fire to her house. Cant wait for the next update. |
| cullenisabella chapter 11 . 7/23/2011 :O I just read your author's note from the previous chapter. You haven't read Twilight? :O Well, sorry to hear about the no update thing, but happy birthday! Nice chapter! Monica |
| cullenisabella chapter 10 . 7/23/2011 Okay... So the reason E killed B's parents was money? How stupid of him! Love, Monica |
| toocute24 chapter 11 . 7/22/2011 So Bella and Edward share their first kiss! Aww! I loved the chapter! (There are a few mistakes. If you want to send me the chapter when you get back, I'll take a look at it for you!) Loved the update! |
| happygolucky65 chapter 1 . 7/22/2011 This was really good,well written but ALL OF YOU GUYS should read Heart Collision by this chick named everychance do it, it's really! really! good! |
| treena-ivy-carter chapter 11 . 7/22/2011 Nice... Sweet and simple...I like it... D Tree |
| Robstenvampgirl chapter 10 . 7/19/2011 i absolutely love it i can't wait for more please update soon thanks for telling me about the story |
| Robstenvampgirl chapter 1 . 7/19/2011 love it! |
| Shelbylee824 chapter 4 . 7/19/2011 Hello again i know I said I would help but I'm really no good with Bella/Edward fics I just don't like them sorrryyy :/ |
| Shelbylee824 chapter 1 . 7/19/2011 Hello okay so I'm liking this so far your structure's good, there were just a few repeated words but other than that this is a good start. |
| toocute24 chapter 10 . 7/17/2011 sort of a cliff hanger? LOL Hun, that is a total cliff hanger and I love it! Great chapter! ) You're just reading Twilight for the first time? Wow! LOL Well I hope you enjoy it! I definitely loved them all! |
| Raylene Alvarez chapter 10 . 7/16/2011 Jane and James need to be taken out once and for all! |
