I loved this!

Love it! :)

Good story!

This was good. I felt my heart break when Neal thought that El was Kate. It killed me. I wish there was a little epilogue where Neal apologizes for getting poisoned and every thinks he's crazy because it wasn't his fault.

Good story...jealousy at its worse

Ergot Yikes Good one loved it

This was awesome...Love the how you put the friendship between Peter and Neal and well everyone...awesome.

It's grea! I love the angst of Neal seeing Kate and fire. The scene where Peter calmed him down! OMG. And then El. Such a motherly woman. I love that she loves Neal also and cried with him, cried for him. I love reading this great story.

But it'd be perfect if there's an after care sequel. You know, where Neal is motherhenned at Peter and El's house. Where occasionally have muscle aches and pains. And nightmares.

I really liked this story a little more than the first one I read of your work. But that was only because El played a bigger role! Both of your stories are brillant keep up the Great Work!

Wow, this was really enjoyable! I love myself some good ol' Neal whump, and this packed quite a nice punch. Poor Neal! I liked the details you put in there, especially "Agent Rice was all too aware how she had fouled up the first time she had worked with the consultant, calling him a tool, ignoring him and using him as bait, she had learned by her errors, watching him closely since then she had changed her mind about him. He was a felon but he was also a good man and she wouldn't drop the ball this time." I like that you fleshed out all your characters, even the original characters. And your descriptions are nicely done. 3

I am really enjoying your white collar stories! This was very orginal I hope you post more stories soon!

I liked it, very original. Some grammar mistakes here and there, but good overall. I could definitely see Neal mistaking Elizabeth for Kate.

This was fantastic!

Awesome job! I really enjoyed this!