AMAZING! I clung to every word, this was so worderfully sensual and in-character. And romantic. A rare combo. :D

Men like Eames, eh? I want one. That was really lovely, Eames being her saviour and all. That was utterly sweet.

I really enjoyed this one shot! You have a few spelling errors, 'mother' instead of 'mouth', and 'going' instead of 'doing', but other than that I can't think of any other concrit!

Another fantastic Ariadne/Eames fic! Brava! I loved it.

Just so you know it is now formulaic in my head: Ariadne/Eames story he protects her and offers to teach her how to fight. Which brings to my favorite lines of this fic. The title and the line where he said he had to teach her how to defend herself again men like him, and then when you call him her knight in tarnished armor (nice one lol)

The whole thing is wonderful, thanks for posting!

Oh my sweet mother Venus! That was so great! I loved every minute of it! You should write a sequel!

WOW. That was hot. Way to go, inspiration! LOL.

I love this pairing. Great job :-)

Great story! This is actually my first time reading a story dedicated to Ariadne and Eames. My conclusion after reading this story is that I aboslutely adore this pairing. Well done!

I thought this was awesome! Can't wait for more!

Oh! And a quick correction: close to the end of the chapter, you wrote "Ariadne opens her 'mother' again..." Hahah, thought you should know.

OMG! This was incredible. I am so wishing I was Ariadne right about now! :)

But seriously, this was well written and true to their characters. Bravo!

I can't believe how much this was so true to the characters! It was perfect :) I really enjoyed reading this, it was too cute. Thank goodness for random inspiration! Can't wait to read more of your stuff :)

Loved it. I hope u do more.

Wow... I always thought myself an Arthur/ Ariadne girl, but now I'm having some doubts...

Your story was very well constructed, like a maze... I kept following it and weaving through the words.

Only now I wish it wasn't the end.