Reviews for Under A Paper Moon |
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Caroline Lockwood chapter 1 . 1/20/2013 Loved it. Well, I lIke anything forwood. But pluses fOr great writing. :) |
Ronnie Ravenly chapter 1 . 12/9/2011 I am truly amazed by how well you captured the characters! A really great one-shot, one of the best I've seen for this couple. You have no obvious grammar-errors, and your story is very realistic. |
plausible deniability chapter 1 . 7/8/2011 Don't know how I missed this. I love it! So much potential. I hope you decide to expand it into a multichapter. Following, in case you do! |
Moniqueaw chapter 1 . 6/2/2011 please make this a story. I'm loving it. |
chillwithJyl chapter 1 . 5/31/2011 LOVED IT! |
belgiques chapter 1 . 5/30/2011 I totally want to see this as a story! This was a great alternate piece for The Descent. I loved it. |
andsoitis2 chapter 1 . 5/30/2011 i love the idea of caroline and tyler running around the world |
jasmineflower27 chapter 1 . 5/30/2011 Please, please, pleeeeeeeeease continue this! It's awesome! :D If you do continue it, i can NOT wait to know what happens! Tyler, Caroline, compulsion and a credit card would just be awesome :D |
SweetTemptation2 chapter 1 . 5/29/2011 This was great! I love how descriptive you are when you write. It's like a movie in my head. :D I like that you sort of made it like episode 2x12 but made it your own. Good job. Waiting for your other story "Dirty Little Secret" too. You're very productive as a writer. |
Crimson Breeze chapter 1 . 5/29/2011 This is great! I would really love to see where you go with this. I hope you decide to continue. |
jm63089 chapter 1 . 5/29/2011 Oh you have to make this into a full story! It was great. I love the chemistry between these two. |