Good story

this was hard on my eyes and why are the dragonballs now ashtrays? think you can do better than this man

least the romance elements were pretty good i guess

cool

LOve it

Awsome

I know im late... but i loved how you used vagetas line during that.

no homo.

Lol got there in no time.

I get it.

Well now, I didn't see that coming at all. XD

Holy cow, this was one heck of a chapter. (But get to Amie's already, will ya? XP) Great job!

A very good chapter, can't believe the League would stoop that low.

Timmy: Believe it, sis. This doesn't look good.

Luigi: We can't help either, we have our own problems.

I know, wing man. I know. And I wish you were here too, hun.

Timmy: We have to get to what we need to do.

Luigi: Right on.

We head out.

Oh wow, what a chapter! This was just amazing! I can't believe this is all happening! This is just freaking sweet.

Timmy: Holy cow!

Luigi: Mamma mia, what a chapter! Giovanni is dead!

Didn't see that one coming...nor Gary and Brock's father.

Timmy: In either event, we should help.

Luigi: We can't, we're not strong enough.

He's right. For now, though, great chapter hun.

When are u going to continu to next chapter? U just us out of the blank dude we dersve for it to be finished I want to see ash become a super saian and also for him to adments his feeling for misty u have left us all out of the blue so can u get on with the story Aready please ?

My heart is pounding from that chapter! The action is picking up, that is for sure! Keep it up!

Oh NOT good! Apparently, I'm two chapters behind and things are NOT looking at all good. Keep it up!