damnit. the story is great and i hoped to read more chapter.

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really interesting travel into ino memory.
Also liked naruto little disappointment speech to ino about her failing at her clan art.
And finally naruto kinda broken, and since ennemy doesn't play fair he decided to cause chao too and fuck the rules.

Nice fic

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Bloody Hell Jester...this is dark. Really didn't think you had it in you to write this...Well, first off, nice job. I like that you're experimenting with genres and horror more. But Why was Ino naked in the cell if it was mental torture? Second, where did you get the idea that setting fire to her mindscape was an idea? It could wake her up. It could also damage her sanity. Are you going to make Ino certifiably insane? Thirdly, when the Hell are you gonna set fire to the prison? I know it's a big place but the setting is getting stale. If you keep rolling with this add some changes to the scenery. With the way this drags on it barely feels like Naruto and his entourage make any progress. One more question: Who would do this mental torture to Ino and why?

interesting chapter.
naruto obtained a new power with that scaled skin.
ask what happened in that place with the girl and ino.
And glad to see naruto doing thing more relevant, hope we will see him as control of his body more often (especially for the big battle and important scenes)
poor ino.

I tried your story, it want for me but I like the guy from disturbed image

good chapter, so another demon appeared.

I hope you complete your story it's very nice

The tension and mystery, spiced with Naruto's anger at Yunika pulls the reader into the chapter. You realize the seriousness of the situation and how desperate Naruto is to get the answers he wants. He's done playing games and he wants to figure out if he's Yunika's tool, pawn, or ally. It's hard to see what's going on in Yunika's, or her fragment's, head. Is she ashamed, embarrassed, tired, or apologetic? What is her ultimate plan for Naruto? Why wipe his mind? Out of pity and mercy? Or is she manipulating him to make herself more trustworthy? The flashback with the forbidden forest was a nice touch. When Orochimaru played with the seal it seems like a logical, realistic outcome and side effect for the Kyubii to be lashed at and contained further. Maybe, for all we know, that's exactly what happened. And how does Kyubii know Orochimaru from before? And Naruto is more and more accustomed to using his demonic power. Will it corrupt him body, mind and soul? Will he become increasingly dependent on his power that he can't function without it? This chapter is well written and thought out. I'm looking forward to seeing Kakashi in action. Don't you DARE kill him lol...seriously.

interesting chapter.
so naruto already seen kyuubi, but the fox sealed the memory of their meeting.
and finally the chapter focus on naruto and ENRA teach naruto how to use his new yokai and dark type skills.

Lol Yeah that's not a big cliffhanger at all! (Voice dripping with sarcasm). The cat trying to open the door was cute. I can see any cat struggle doing that. Also the emotions of Enra are dramatic. You make him sound ancient, which we've guessed. He sounded a little in panic towards the end. I know Enra is yours but is that really in character for him? My only other question is are you trying to create something between Cora and Naruto? If so do not rush it. Maybe do something in the next book. This isn't a Disney story lol. Let me know if you need more insight.

so enra can move between bodies.
interesting.
hope naruto become the central character of main plot soon.

Ok I've had time to digest what happened to poor Shikamaru. This was decently written. The drama and post traumatic stress Naruto gives off is believable. He seems to grow up more as the story evolves, and he's forced into situations where he needs to face harsh reality. Soooooo Cora has a crush on Naruto?...Ok. Let me make this clear: Absolutely. No. Cheesy. Cliche. Romance. Please! I mean you can if you want but I guarantee you'll lose points to your house, and get more flames to add to your pile from the last chapter. But speaking of Cora: I think I speak for everyone when I say she is mysterious and intriguing, and though her lack of story background may add to that, I for one would like to know more about her. (hint). However I look forward to Kakashi's supposed rescue! Please don't kill him at least! So many flames in your future if you do. Overall well done. And look over the story. There are a couple of words in places that should be replaced. Just two.