Reviews for Undisclosed Desires
Guest chapter 9 . 7/7/2016
please update this! its one of my favourites and would love to see it finished!
Rafaperez chapter 9 . 12/7/2014
Update pleaseeeeeeee, more ;)
bevfanK chapter 9 . 9/21/2014
I know it's been a really long time but I really love this story and would love to see it finished. There are so few virgin Beckett stories and yours is my favorite. _
ArtemisBeloved chapter 9 . 2/12/2014
I can always count on you to come up with a new angel on a plot line.
I like that you dont folow main streem but still have a true way to portray the caracters. Mabye not true to the canon on tv...but true enuff so i can here the tone of kate and castle in my heard when i read it. I do hope this is not the end and final line in this story.. if so do folow up I am sure you can sques more out of your mind...
Oh and this story was just perfect to get my morning coffe brake. Now i am of to have a good day I hope. Wish you the best.. keep up the wrighting and i weill peek in again and se what progress you have made. Have a good day Jonny
angiemorais chapter 9 . 12/27/2013
I loved it! It's just the kind of story I was looking for! Is there a chapter 10?
Caskett-Happened chapter 6 . 6/2/2013
"let me touch you" omg stopp
Caskett-Happened chapter 4 . 6/2/2013
this is so good i have final to study for damnit
Caskett-Happened chapter 3 . 6/2/2013
my mouth was other wised occupied,

i literally can not
Caskett-Happened chapter 2 . 6/2/2013
IOHFALJFJALSDGKJAFLS. THIS IS PERFECT
Caskett-Happened chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
IM CRYING OMG YES CRY
Coolmon54 chapter 9 . 3/13/2013
Okay seriously how could you not fall in love with him? I mean hell I'm a straight guy and I'd fall for him
Krysy Winters chapter 9 . 12/7/2012
Please tell me you've got more of this planned? I really really wanna read it.
slaymaster chapter 9 . 10/26/2012
I've had a smile on my face pretty much the whole time I've been reading. You were right at the start - it did need the suspension of disbelief and I was skeptical, but it was well written and, dare-I-say-it, believable.
Of course, at the beginning, I hadn't thought that her virginity would have been because of a promise to her mother, and as soon as I saw that I instantly bought it. I love that you kept her as a sexual person, just without the sex, if that makes sense? I've always seen her as very aware of her body, and her sexuality, and to an extent have seen these things as fundamental to her personality, but that doesn't necessarily mean sex has to be happening, and, while I didn't think it did, I just never would have thought that she could be a virgin.

I've really enjoyed it so far and I hope you continue
slaymaster chapter 2 . 10/26/2012
gaaaah the end of this chapter is SOOOO CUTE gosh i'm smiling like a lunatic!
LadyAilith chapter 9 . 10/16/2012
I'd love to read the rest of your story! Please finish it?

Please?
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