Nice story but your grammer distracted me greatly

muy interesante Dios los bendiga a todos y llegue a sus corazones

It was something good to end on, but you could add to it if you wished to do so. Good play on the Storyline, though. It was clearly well thought out, or you have insane luck, the opposite of Rito!

YuixRito...
I love it...

I'm sorry, but apparently, I'm not a big fan of changing a scene in the original. I think it's a good way to tell a twist, but overall, it doesn't seem worth the trouble to me. Other than that, you're a very gifted writer, and I'm not saying that just to be nice.

Wow You should carry this on!

It would be so good for a story!

beautiful story my friend

Great story, Rito/Yui is my favourite couple for To Love-Ru, loved the story it was cute and passionate I hope to see more stories like this. Keep up the good work.

how nice.

Thanks for the story... I really love Rito/Yui. I hope that you follow the sugestion of the first reviewer and continue this story.

Excellent on Rito and Yui's relationship. They had a past.I think that is cute. I kind of more support Rito/Mikan or Rito/Lala or Rito/Haruna.I do support Rito/Yui. Yui is one of my favorite characters second to Mikan.X3 But Awesome oneshot. Hope for more To Love Ru fanfics.

Ermm.."sayonara" is a farewell, not a greeting. It means "good-bye." You might wanna change that.

Thanks for writing this. I really like YuixRito, but there are barely any stories of them :(

you should rely recponsider making this a one-sot and make it a story it has a good plot line to it