Awww... Poor Kisa-san...

But I'm glad it was just misunderstanding.

And poor Yukina too... he was so panicked.

Loving it!

Aww, this was adorable! x3

Awww! so cute Yukina! Loved the story. I laughed my arse off at the last part )

D'aaaaawwwwwww xD thought this was too cute :3

awwwwwhhh oOo

Ahhh, my fav pairing :))
So SWEET .
Oh the hopeless Kisa :P

I really like your writing style and you played out the story wonderfully. so well done for that.
buuuut... -and this is just a personal opinion- the random romanji bits in it kinda ... ruined it a little. I don't think it's a good idea to add them in with ENGLISH fanfics, some people disagree saying it makes it more 'realistic' but i, sadly do not feel the same way, it kinda disappoints me.
But other than that it was great, i hope to read some more of this stuff from you! :3

This is really cute! I feel like it could actually have happened in the manga; most FFs I read about these two are way too OOC for my taste, but you managed to depict their personalities very well. You should defiantly do more with this pair!

nice! That was sweet and lovely, though I feel sorry for Kisa underestimating himself... He is totally wrong about this!

But I have a small remark, if you don't mind - is it just me or does Kisa use word "baka" unnaturally often? I may be wrong but I don't remember him doing that in the series... Not that much "

awww i love it soo cute and damn yukina frgetting mmm

This fic is a bit cute :). But, I notice here, you make almost all wrong of called name of characters.

Kisa is called 'Kisa-san' by Ritsu, not 'Shouta-san'. Because Shouta is first name of Kisa. It's not polite to call first name of older person, especially they're in office.

Then, Ritsu is being called 'Ricchan' by Kisa, not Onodera. And Takano call Kisa with 'Kisa', not 'Shouta-san'. Takano is younger than Kisa, but he is his boss. So, Kisa call him with 'Takano-san'.

Hee~ I hope you're not confuse or upset of my correction. Sorry for grammar error.

But, overall i like the story. Keep writting~

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Sincerely,

Hiyo-chan

This was so cute and the ending made me laugh. You got their personalities spot on, i've only read a few fics of Sekaiichi Hatsukoi or Junjou Romantica, but i feel like some people put them really out of character, so it was nice to read one that went along with the originals. XD

This fanfiction struck a perfect balance of angst and love. With Yukina always being depicted as the perfect boyfriend, I'm glad he stood Kisa up. It shows that even someone who appears to be flawless does, indeed, have flaw. Kisa waiting so long for Yukina show up the first time showed how much he's willing to sacrifice for time spent with Yukina. The second time Kisa got stood up, he was even more admirable. He still loved Yukina even after waiting four hours for him the first time they were supposed to meet. I felt such sympathy towards Yukina's reasons for missing their second meeting and I'm glad that he apologized so earnestly. The ending was funny, too. You are one of my favorite authors based solely on this story. Please, please write more! XD

I love it hahaha Love never feels no pain i think if your not him at least i give it 10 thumps...d...up good job loved it

I love this pair! Shouta-chan's soooo cute even when he's already 30, correction, he's soooo cute because he's 30!

Shouta-chan's insecurities can kill anyone within a second~~~

And I loved how you describe Yukina-chan's guilt~~~ he's totally in character and soooo cute~~~ cutest seme ever~~~ (teddy-bear-cute, not hot-cute XD)

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