That was really good

Oh my god! Thank you for recommending my stories! That just made my entire day! Your so nice! :D

I really enjoyed this fic. I love Bruce and Dick father son moments. :)

Thanks again!

I liked it. Nicely written, nothing felt out of character, too much. Nothing I could really pin down, anyways. However...I was...disturbed by your lack of commas. You might want to consider reading, at least reading your dialog, out loud to hear where the commas go.

You also missed a very important grammar rule with these commas. Let me show it to you in the most concise way possible.

"Let's eat Grandpa!" vs. "Let's eat, Grandpa!"

Commas save lives.

See what I mean, though? The addressee need a comma right before, and right after, their name.

Cute and Straight to the point.

I liked this :) nice little chat between Bruce and Dick

I love that story by Frellich. It's the best one of its kind, like NO competion there. I'm sure Frellich appreciates that review of yours. Alright back to your story. It was very nicely written, the characters were well. . . very in-character. I Especially loved that the fluff between Brice and Dick. It was the perfect amount. Not to much not to little! So Bravo! Can't wait to read more stories from you! Bravo!

A big thumbs up for this story. The interaction between Bruce and Dick is very well written and the ending is very sweet yet you have raised some interesting questions. Has Superboy got a failsafe? What will happen if he goes rogue? Well, we will have to wait and see.

I always like reading moments between the Dynamic Duo. And this one-shot was a nice moment between them. I liked this; good job.