Just gotta ask are you one of those authors who forgets that he made naruto op but forgets all his abilities? like dude with just the hirashin and rasengan naruto is easily ss rank unless your one of those loons who will say naruto doesn't have experience or should "hide" his skills like waht sense does that make? so with just those jutsu's along konan and everyone else there would of been killed easily, only one that could possibly give naruto a challenge would be pain even than that isn't 100% sense what else does naruto know?

Great I love it
When will we continue?
Yeah, will it be a nice Harem for Naruto to compose of Yugito, Mei, Samui, Yugao, Mabui, Anko, Kurenai, Hana, Tsume, Tsunade and oh make sure that everyone ends up getting pregnant with Naruto?

More please

nice job, PLZ PLZ PLZZZZZ! UPDATE!

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interesting

Nice story so far wonder what's going to happen when Naruto enters konoha again anyways keep up the great work!

i like it, some errors in grammar and spelling, like Omoi not Omni. dialogue ahouldnt realy be in the middle of a paragraph, it should always start a new one, unless its "..." Naruto was telling them, "..." where the person speaking comes in the middle of the dialogue.
but so far so good, cant wait for more, and i cant wait to see it get better, a beta might be a good idea! best of luck!

Can't wait for the next one

have to say great job on the new chapter. I cant wait to see what the girls have plan to help naruto out and what will happen once naruto enters the leaf village.

NEED UPDATE...

make more chapters

Please update soon

My god. So sad and yet so wonderful at the same time.

Sad because of all the death.

And wonderful that Naruto found healing.

continue