Reviews for Not Entirely Unwelcome |
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sfiddy chapter 1 . 11/9/2019 I love little stories like this. It's such a neat little package, part character study and part evolution. I like that you brought it full circle with such care that we can't help but feel relief that he finally slept. :). Wonderful. |
Larisa chapter 1 . 11/14/2013 Wonderful! :) |
Rachel Smith Cobleigh chapter 1 . 12/28/2012 Sweet, the best possible world, as unlikely as it may be. Thanks for this little bit of wishful thinking, told well. :) |
Audrey C chapter 1 . 12/12/2012 Lovely little story. I enjoyed it very much! |
Iceheart15 chapter 1 . 8/10/2012 I always felt that the season 2 ending was a huge mistake. A lovely oneshot, it brought out the side of Guy we knew was always there. If only Marian had seen it. |
ImagineI chapter 1 . 5/8/2012 This is an intensely romantic piece that is brimful of considered characterisation and a rhythm that makes reading that much more pleasurable. You have a beautiful talent when it comes to words: you are economic and yet still design something rich and bewitching. I truly believed the love between them and share your deep disappointment with the Season 2 Finale. In fact, generally, I reject it. This fanfiction serves as an epic aid and works very effectively in recreating the next passage of their journey. I anticipate reading more of your work on this couple and whatever other treasures you shall gift. Thank you for the truly lovely read, ~ImagineI |
zigra chapter 1 . 1/9/2012 Very sweet text ), and Marian is exactly as should be - wise and ready to give herself and her man another chance. Thanks for sharing! |
omgitsalexmarie chapter 1 . 7/10/2011 Very cute, I love it! (: |
dead leaves lie chapter 1 . 6/25/2011 there's something about this which made me very happy after i finished reading it. i do think that guy was a bit ooc in the first part, but the last two sections were lovely. i hope you write more of this pairing in the future! |
ColoursNeverSeen chapter 1 . 6/13/2011 Lovely Guy and Marian story, I really liked this! :) It reminded me on something I read on LJ though I can't remember what... And you are anbsolutely right, there is not enough GxM fics; hope to see more from you in the future. x |
Cindy4806 chapter 1 . 6/11/2011 Truly lovely story. Thanks for writting it as you are right there can never be too many Guy and Marian stories. :) |
bellatrix lestrange chapter 1 . 6/9/2011 Ahh, dear, this is good! Obviously not having watched Robin Hood has it's setbacks, but I enjoyed reading this nonetheless (: Be careful with colloquialisms e.g. "she fully expected him..." - but generally this was okay, and your language connects to the context that the story was set it, thus the authenticity is excellent. I'm puzzled- are Marian and Guy supposed to be 'close' as a couple? Or is it their noticeable 'hostility' towards one another part of the, you know, 'first night of marriage' idea? Or is Guy's '"unpredictable"-ness the cause of this? I'm not really sure what else to say, but I'd be happy to continue reading more of this (: I really connected to the character of Marian, and it was interesting to see what Guy is like from her perspective, of sorts, and not another's. Well done sweetie (: |
Luciana chapter 1 . 6/6/2011 lovely! i loved the fourth vignette especially "...finally found a cure for his insomnia." it leaves me with a happy feeling, this story. i hope you write more! |
LadyKate1 chapter 1 . 6/5/2011 Sweet! :) I agree, there can never be enough Guy/Marian ANYWHERE. I would have loved to know more about the circumstances of their marriage here, and ... also, I'm not sure I can see Guy giving up THAT easily when Marian shrinks away from him on their wedding night. I mean, I don't think he's FORCE her, but I think he'd make a little more effort, and frankly he'd probably show some anger as well. The man does have anger management issues. ;-) The last two vignettes were great though (though I think you mean "not entirely unwelcome" at the end, not "unwelcoming"?). I hope you write more of them! |
NoOneWouldListen chapter 1 . 6/5/2011 That was nice! Dunno if I could call it sweet, but it leave a very pleasant feeling when you've finished reading. Especially loved the last part ;) Great job! And yes, there's never enough Guy/Marian (or Guy/anyone, really) on XD Love your handle by the way! NOWL |