Youre off to a good start, and I like your pace. Take all the time you need. Looking forward to watching this story develop:)

Philligan sex! :D xD Besides The Jedam sex from the earlier Chapter... this is my highlight :D xD Can't help it i love me some Morr/Punk sex :D Just posted a new viddie to my YT account with Punk/Morr sexy time in it :D xP

Don't really care for OC's but I love this fic girly! Keep up the awesome work!

Show the werewolf already! LOL...I can't wait for the next chapter!

Yaay Phil/Morrison sex. Love those two together.

Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Phil/Morrison sex. Yummy. Update soon.

Wow, these two chapters are great! When do we get to see what happens next? LOL...

awesome!

Oooh shit. Go back inside Wes. The wolf is not your friend...well okay, it could be one of your friends turning into a wolf and killing cattle but that is not the point. Point is, get your booty back in that house and lock the door.

now it's getting more intresting, and now I'm curious as to what is going to happen next. Continue soon.

Ohhh much better, Irvine showed up in the story...my interest just peaked up 1000%...lol. The set ups are just getting more and more intense. I don't get creeped out that easily, but some places like the cornfields are.

Love the character of Ribit...Dill Pickles grown up...made me do a spit choke...lol now that's a scary image, but one that I can funnily conjur up.

I can't wait to see what happens next...and on yeah remind me to bring couch arm covers when I go visit Jeff and Adam!

They say if you don't hook a reader in the first chapter - hell, the first few sentences - then no matter how good the rest is, it will never be read. At least, that's what i hear from publishers & professional authors.

Welp, i'm hooked. This was not boring. It was rich & full of importance. The first paragraph sets up the intrigue. I have a million questions about the creature that must be answered. Sure, it's just a cow, but the mood of terror you've woven with your description makes us wonder what - or who - is next.

Oh my precious. The Jedam! The sweet, beautiful Jedam! We so rarely get to see them like this, together, content & happy. Establishing the calm before the storm. But even here there's an ominous foreshadowing.

*giggles* Their little exchange while Adam is reading is so precious & authentic. They know each other so well, but still manage to surprise each other, perhaps /because/ of how close they are. *snickers* Adam is def a nagging wife. & Jeff loves it.

Creative blocks SUCK. I think i'm coming up on one now. Aww, i love seeing Adam being such a voracious reader. And bad cook. :P

SQUEE! Wes! I am uber excited about Wes. His moms seems like a bitch. But it doesn't seem like she means to hurt anybody. She's not malicious, just troubled.

Doesn't look right. *snorts* Sounds like my dad when i mention hanging out with guys. Wes is trying to rile her, as you do when you live with your family. At least she's better than cleaning the garage, lol.

It's okay that you're still working out Wes's background. Just writing is the best way to do it. I'm so happy you found a fic to be your catharsis; you needed one. I love it so far & can't wait for more, Sugar. *loves on*

I honestly don't care if this story is 'boring' to you or anyone else, because I think this is great!

There are animal killings! And it's a horror theme! XD

(reads on)

Awww, Wes isn't happy...:( (takes out gun) Who is responsible for this? Was it you, Margaret? Hmmmm? You closet homophobe!XD

I can see why Wesley is friends with Jeff and Adam...they gots a lot in common. Both Jeff and Wesley are down right badass...cum to think of it, they're ALL down right badass.

They're smartasses too!

Jeff/Wesley/Adam...The Three SmartAsses. Dont mess with them, or they'll own your ass!XD XD XD

I love this, and I'm looking forward to reading more of this. Post the next chapter! It's killing me! (waits patiently)XD

By the way, yes, you got yourself a new reviewer!XD

Until then!

Nice start. I can't wait to see where this goes.

Impossible for ANYTHING you write to be considered boring. If you don't write for yourself then what's the point. We are lucky that you share it with us. This is where "big name" published writers jump the shark. When they stop writing stories they love, and start to write only for profit...they become boring and formulaic(spelling?). Writing for yourself is the only way to go. If nobody was reading our currant FF story we would still write it, because WE LOVE it...and that's the way it should be. So don't you worry one instant about that...doing it for yourself is not wrong...and doesn't make it boring.

I can't WAIT for the next chapter...I am already wondering what is going to come out from behind the storage bulidngs, because I know it will.

Used to visit my Aunts farm in Iowa during the summers. The cornfield came right up to the property line...the yard where we played. During the day it was fine, but as the long shawdows of late afternoon fell over the yard, the cornfeilds just got damn creepy...this is the feeling I get from your description...it's nice and pleasent during the day, but what comes under that arch late at night...what is lurking behind the storage buildings...

MORE must have MORE!

intresting, the first chapter was kinda boring but it peaked my intrest. I hope you continue it soon.