Reviews for A Tale of a Mermaid
justawritier chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
This was liked it :)
oceancity chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
What a beautifully-written story! You have a talent for writing, really! Good job! I love Philip & Syrena's pairing. They were so cute in POTC :)
Aelineth chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
I adore this one-shot of yours! I will admit that despite I thought the couple were cute in the movie, I thought some things needed to be adjusted - but you know, you really made Phillip and Syrena speak out, and I loved the one-shot all together.

I simply love Phillip.
Blessed Me chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
love. sequel please. :)
Old Emerald Eye chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
Nice take on the 'What happened next?' thing.
teja chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
Super cute. I liked it. :)
heytherehoyhoy chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
Kawaii! And Lawson? Really automatic word-fixer? I was trying to spell kawaii! This was guud! Keep up the writins!

Yay! I reviewed!
Shani8 chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
Aww... this was a great story! :)

I definitely enjoyed your take on Philip and Syrena and their life after On Stranger Tides.

Well done!

~Shaliza :)
Goddess-Divine-05 chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
You have no idea how giggly I feel because of this fic! hehe
Official Scroll Keeper chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Very nice idea, and the characters were beautifully depicted. I especially love the sermon. Great job!

Thankies,

OSK
oodlesofdoodles chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
This is so great, so different. So many people are writing stories about these two that seem to have the same summaries.

You should more with this storyline, perhaps some more oneshots? The way you have set them up lends itself to more stories I feel
Linariel chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
Gorgeous wonderful ending for those two. Though I wish you'd continue this one shot it has potential to go further none the less wonderful work.
Motek chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
that was great story, thanks for writing it:)
why won't someone delete this chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Can I just say that even though I adore all the stories about Philip/Syrena after the kiss, yours is very simplistic and beautiful. While it's fun to think that Philip and Syrena go through an epic journey for some reason, it's more likely that she saved him and then they got married and are living somewhere happily together. I love that you explored this possibility and I love how you characterize Syrena in her new life and Philip's sermon at the end reminds the reader of how their new life together came to be: because of forgiveness.
Actaeus chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
I approve heartily of this story. It's excellently written; captures them very well, and leaves us wondering a lot of questions:

How did she save him? (He had a pretty serious through and through wound from a sword)

How did they get from Whitecap to Massika?

How did he snag the minister's job?

How long can she keep the secret?

All in all, a very good yarn that keeps us wanting MORE once the curtain falls.
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