It was a good story. To see the reaction of the others (first of all the president) would have been amazing, but such a story does not need anything to make it better

This is such a beautiful story- I really like the way you show Kyoko’s feelings and appreciate how hard it would be for her to understand she can be truly loved. Really I don’t know how anyone could have the strength to trust after such terrible betrayals of both family and romantic love. Had me in tears, but also very very happy with the sweetness of Kyoko starting to see the truth. Thanks for sharing

I couldn't stop grinning foolishly while reading this lol. This was soooo good, I love it.

loved it. you dealt with the sho confession so wellI don't think I've seen it done that way before. he's such an over the top character but you made his subdued tone seem authentic. and overall, really enjoyed the writing and the way the characters think. only wished I could have read more. thanks for posting.

Short but wonderfully sweet! *heart* thank you for writing and sharing!

That was beautiful!
I think the slightly slower reveal works well. Plus Lory was right if he wanted to show how he really feels he has to trust her with his secrets. When he knows it is her, not just Bou...
I think in the Manga version he knows this & that is a huge reason for the delay in his confession.

All in all I think it was an excellent story.
I think she likely would have reacted more to the big shock of him as corn, yet with your version it seened almost like she had already started guessing...
The conversation with Sho at the end of the concert was solid Gold. Kuon's statements & her pointing out that Kuon was her childhood friend...

I adore the story and its characters! Thank you for writing it! :)

Awesome chapter! :)

Awesome chapter! I really like the concept of this story! :)

I fall in Love!
Really in Love *0*

I like this. I read your miniseries too. I like the way you portray Sho, not making him pure evil, but still a petulant jerk.

But of course Ten and Kyoko are just meant to be.

This was a unique setup for them to get together, and the ultimate reveal. Kudos on originality.

How about a sequel ? I really liked this story ! More please

Loved it..Ren x Kyoko...I'm a major fangirl...but really loved the fanfic..it really was well written..I can that..I was missing their thoughts..and turmoil...their inner battles but great job..I liked how u had Sho in there but not a main cuz I'm not a fan of him... Aaaaewww...Cute...I loved it..

One shot of their married life or a full story?

I loved it. I'm devastated that it's over. I want more. :)