:) PERFECT

I love this so much

Nope. Nope. Nope. Sorry. You didn't include Barney's awesome 16 step proposal to Robin on the roof of the WWN building. Sorry but just nope. This isn't right.

Loved it! I liked how you told the story in a kind of jumpy way, just like the show.

I don't know whether or not you plan to continue with this. I hope you do. Good luck! I'm subscribing just to make sure.

You're such a good writer, so very simple and plain and so very, very right when it comes to Barney/Robin. They belong with each other.

Amazing! I loved everything about it. The way you painted so much detail with so little words and how you kept everyone so in character, while making the "strange" romance between Barney and Robin work. Loved, loved, loved it!

This is a fantastic piece of work. I came here looking for something wonderfully Barney and Robin, poignant without being too flowery, fun without being too silly. This was everything I wanted and more. Your writing style is lovely. It's very minimalist, and by that I mean it's not peppered with unnecessary descriptions and words. You use your words very carefully and it is incredibly effective. Your cadence and flow is well crafted, bringing us along on the character's thought process and keeping some information, revealing some and never losing the reader in the process. You stayed true to all of the characters and threw in little nuances of your own that I absolutely loved; them eating Chinese food and being considerate of the other's cravings, Robin gaining weight. The way you portrayed Robin's heartbreak was very well done, so sad even though I knew it was a happy ending. That's good writing. And your Barney was his usual awesome self, while being so completely real and sweet. This was a pleasure to read, as I hope this review is.

I think I just died of awesome. This story was truly legendary. My favorite party was chapter 5 with their argument and kiss! You really captured them well. That is totally how it would happen for them; angry, confused, in the middle of an argument, but completley, madly, and passionatley in love!

This story is amazing!

Hey! I'd just want to say your style of writing is really nice, light and descriptive and narrative in equal parts. Does that make sense? :)) Basically, it's just right. And I love how you portray Barney and Robin, especially the part where Barney didn't even realize he was still hung up on Robin because it was already normal for him. The timeline is gorgeous too. Keep writing! Love the story.

so short, yet so powerful :)

so cool and refreshing, Love the concept! :D Do update soon..

He softened further and pulled her into him, kissing her hair. "Yeah, we are."

*melts*

Maybe I've told you this before, but I love the way you write!

This is really quite lovely. You have a very interesting writing style, and it's great. I love the pacing of it. And it's all very them, you know? Really nice work. I'm looking forward to the next part. Any idea how long it's going to be?

loving this more and more with every chapter!:D watch your spelling though- i spotted a couple mistakes while reading but the most obvious was in the second to last line: it's 'caulking,' not 'cocking.' lol. and speaking of lines, the very last is my favorite this time:))