I know it's been going on eight years now, but please, pleeeeeeeeeease, update or write a sequel...I loved this & wanna see what Erik's got planned...I can totally see this actually at one point happening between the two of them, you've beautifully captured Charles's emotions, the distress one would go through during a situation like this...kidnapped by the person you love, but they're not the same person you fell in love with, even though they still love you back...
Erik & Charles (at least in the prequels/revised timeline) are third in the complicated/obsessive/still in love with/stalker-y types of relationships/couples (the other two being Cole & Phoebe from original Charmed; & Grindelwald & Dumbledore)...but for Erik, he's not evil, never has been, it's just he had a hard life, being sent to the concentration camps as a kid, losing his family/his mother killed right in front of him, being experimented on...I think that (movie-wise) Erik's only ever really been in love with 2 people, obviously Charles, & his wife Magda (Nina's mother from Apocalypse)...I don't count Peter's (Quicksilver) mother because from the sound of it, she & Erik just had a one-night-stand...cause I highly doubt that he knew she got pregnant because while he has killed people, he's just not the kind of person to just walk out on/abandon his kids (again though, this is movie-wise, not sure about the comics & at least with the tv series Evolution-total asshole even towards his kids, I mean just look at Wanda/Scarlet Witch-but again, he's a good man & father in the films, he's more of an antagonist/anti-hero)...
Anyway, please don't let this die, it's too good a fic...

im sorta confused by the story
just update lah

please update soon!

Oh this is awesome do please update it, oh I wonder if Charles could have Erik's kid? If I remember in the comics Erik did have two kids Piero and Wanda ( it would be cool if Charles is their mother :3 ) ( oh if you don't know Wanda is scarlet witch and Piero is the sliver speeder they become heros and part of the Avengers as well even though their father is magneto so it makes you wonder what their mother must of been like for them to choose to be heroes :3)

good story so far!

I hope you update soon! ! !

plz...?

soo good but chapters so short

Amazing story :)

Can't wait to see how it progresses!

So far, this is a really captivating story! I'm so curious what happens next I hope you update soon!

Love it can't wait till the next chapter. Eric: {His MINE!) lol funny.

awww just aww nice

I love it! Hope you had a nice vacation :) I can't wait to see what's gonna happen. Charles is amazing and...squishy. Don't you wanna hug him like a marshmallow?

hey,

thanks a lot for this chapter. I kinda like the idea of Charles having another power... After all, Jean was a thelepat and a telekinesis.

I'm just wondering of you could make longer chapter...? Pretty please. And pleeaaaaaaaaaase, don't stop writting! Can't wait to read the next chapter

I love it and please update as soon as you can. _

update soon please

hmm this seems promising i like cannot wait for mroe