I know this story is OLD, but man, it was AMAZING! Please continue (I just discovered it!)

Okay I know it's been two years but if you ever wanna continue this story that would be really great! In other words PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE I WILL DIE WITHOUT IT!

this is a very good story. please continue.

Don't leave it off there! Finish it!

I hope for Chloe/Bruce, soo would like to see Chloe happy with someone since, u are going with, doing Tollie.

will there be more?:(

just found out this story and it's impressive. You're doing an amazing job here. I'm loving every aspect of this story so far. You even brought Lana Lang and Conner into the mix.

Can't wait for the next chapter ;)

Well I didn't think the Tess being alive thing was dumb - I liked it and it's actually a lot more believable than many things they've done in Smallville. I like the fact you are focusing on all the characters and also addressing things that weren't addressed in the show - like Chloe's disappearing power and the fact Jimmy was barely mentioned after he died. Well done - hope you write more chapters.

If it weren't for the Tess surviving crap then I would have liked this. But yeah I think that it's ridiculous that you had Tess survive considering the show writers intented on her to die. No offense intended man I just think that bringing Tess back is an awful idea. Don't let me drag you down, I'm just sayin.

I was so hoping to find somebody doing a Metropolis series. I love it so far and can't wait to read more :)

Loved it well done. I can't wait to see what happens next. PPMS!

We're only into the third episode, but this story is A-mazing! The interaction between Clois and Bruce in their office was so comical I loved it! Bruce was really pushing the envelope by testing Clark especially when it comes to Lois.

And I absolutely loved seeing jealous Clark. Not that I can blame him since he and Lois hadn't been spending much time together. But seeing them kiss and make up after talking about their younger selves was awesome. I'll probably be saying this a lot throughout the story, but...I really, really, really wished this happened on the show! I mean, how could TPTB pass up the opportunity for Clois to address a lot of the things that happened in the past or what should've happened leading up to the finale. Like the significance of the Kawatchi bracelet, Clark being able to listen to Lois' heartbeat, them discussing Lana's return during Chloe's wedding, or why they waited seven years - SEVEN YEARS - to get married! The list goes on and on...

But thankfully, this fic is fulfilling everything the show missed out on so THANK YOU! :)

Great new chapter honey!

I love the way you write! The coy humour between Clark and Lois, and Brice Wayne, Lex and Lana... Perfect! Please continue!

Ps, this is going to be Tollie right?

Love it!

nice. will we see more chloe? or some bruce/chloe. ppms