Reviews for Troublesome
SelenetheNerd chapter 1 . 7/28/2019
I absolutely adored this. I now crave one from the point of view of their respective wives.
Quillion9000 chapter 1 . 2/16/2017
That ending with Shino was funny.
White Night Dragon chapter 1 . 10/27/2016
Aaah, the counterpart for your Relaxing at the Onsen story, right? I'm so glad I read it, it's really hillarious.
Dahajo chapter 1 . 2/23/2016
I love it.
Warrof chapter 1 . 11/30/2015
Lols, nice work.
Silvereye-BW chapter 1 . 6/9/2015
Loved it!
codyhobgood271 chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
Oh my gosh this was so damn funny I just died laughing though the whole story. XD Awesome job I loved it. :)
Lonekat chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
I tip my hat off to you. You have written one of the funniest things that I have ever read. Thank you. This was fricking hilarious. Love the ending.
abcccasdasc chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
I really enjoyed the humor in this! I burst out laughing when I read "large forehead of youth." Great little story!
Vongolafan16 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
BWAHAHAHAHAA! THAT WAS HILARIOUS!
Ben10 madness chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
This story truley made me laugh my ass off! I can't wait to see your other stories that come after this one!
Yanirca chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
lolz bug reppelent!
JESSEshogun chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
hilarious! favorite story/ author all checked. thanks for the laughs
Aramus13 chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
All totally plausible scenarios
Raddok chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
This funny as fucking hell, man. I usually don't like oneshots because I like long, compelling stories that get me involved for at least tens of thousands of words... but this was GENIUS!

I especially liked how you did the pairings for these 6 (7, with Shino) men. Very, very good spread.

All in all, great job :D
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