This is how ya write SEX Fanfic

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I really enjoyed this tiny one-shot. Good Job!

I just want to say that was a amazing story I just want to ask when will you make another and when you do I need to read it.

This story was great i enjoyed being a sexy zoroark with the busom of a goddess, I read it with my i must point out insane amount of typos and inaccuracies from the pokemon universe was actually physically painful for me. Love you for life xoxoXOXO touch lots of butts love me 3

I really liked reading it. It was a fun journey, really touching.

I think you should definitely some other love stories like this and some adventuring too. I just read a fanfiction called, 'Lucario's Ultimate Adventure' and it made this story like a licorice compared to a chocolate bar.

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Always loved that combination would be interesting if there was more story but great job

This is a awesome story! And I like what you did there when in Lucario's thoughts that he thought Zoroark the most perfect female Pokemon. Also, don't mind my name, Lucario' best friend is Fox Mccloud and girlfriend is Zoroark.

Jesus loves you and thinks you're amazing and will help you and come into your life if you ask and repent out loud God and Jesus has a better plan for you please don't waste your blessing, gift, destiny. I love you buddy God and Jesus and me and many others want you to go to heaven and don't care what any of you have ever done, we really mean it we don't care, not even if it was something "unforgivable", unforgivable is not in our dictionary I love you buddies you're all amazing and winners. PLEASE DONT WASTE YOUR BLESSING

This made me laugh WAY too much for something written to be sexual. Like, you have no idea. I was spitting all over my screen trying to suppress my laughter.
4/10, not enough funny
-IGN

I read this with my friends in a skype call. We roleplayed as the other pokemon. I can say we were both passionatley aroused the enire time. I turned gay because i was reading it with another guy. He accepted my transformation into gaydom. Now we are both deeply in love, and when we go to bed ;) we cosplay as the pokemons and read this while passionatley making love.

WHAT IN THE ACTUAL HECK IS THIS I NEED MORE I HAVE T HVAE 'EBGSRFFSASDBGROBGODNBG666RABKGFILSBLIGBIRORGANSME894H9HF9843