Reviews for Oh Sh t!
Dylandarling1 chapter 1 . 9/29/2019
Awesome story I loved the plot! And bonus sex scenes ! Thank you for your awesome imagination and writing abilities!
kcisjohan chapter 11 . 7/7/2019
I loved it. Really great story.
catspats31 chapter 11 . 2/24/2019
While the writing quality of your story is good in terms of spelling only, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:

"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."

Remove all of the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed such as Archive Of Our Own or WattPad.
Steva chapter 11 . 1/19/2019
Hey there I dunno if your account still on but I do really want To think you for this original fic I'm a native french and I'm still an intermediate in english but I read the entire fiction without have to go check the dictionnary sooo thank you for this easy-to-read-and-understand fic it was soooo goood hope I'll find other stories on your profile.
Keep writing mwaaak!
Brenda247 chapter 11 . 4/22/2017
That was very nice. Lol.
yukimae86 chapter 11 . 4/15/2017
I like the ending i almost thought kyuuxtachi would not come true
memoriesofdarkness chapter 11 . 1/16/2017
This is THE BEST sasunaru fanfic i've read so far! just perfect amount of humor and an awesome plot. i never thought i'd like itakyuu but your story even made that possible for me. seriously! itakyuu was soooo amazing!
Tuesday's-Here chapter 11 . 8/29/2016
ah crap I put my email in wrong sorry! it's waterqueen18yahoo .com
Tuesday's-Here chapter 11 . 8/29/2016
So I finish this awesome story that has been topped off by some delicious NaruSasu sex (Kyu's hilarious winning bet! and who says Sasuke wouldn't love bottoming? I think he sure would!) when what do I find but a personalized note to me! I wasn't even logged on since this story came from a blogger's recommendations list but I had to leave reviews because this story just got to me! Sorry for that! This is my ffnet account, as you will be able to tell by my profile I'm pretty new and am a reader not a writer but I had to go add this story to my favorites! I seriously had to go take a break after reading the final chapter but damn am I glad I just had to finish this today! My email is and might I say that you fucking rock? Seriously is it normal for authors to reply to readers? Maybe it is just the fangirl high from this story but I seriously read your note and I fangirled over being spoken to!

Thank you, for the story and all the wonderful things it made me feel and thank you personally for speaking out to me. Man if it feels this good to be noticed as a reader how much better must it be for a writer to be acknowledged?

P.S. Itachi and Kyu's history?! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Yes Yes Yes! OOHHHHH I can't believe it Yes I will totally have to fangirl all over that! Thank you oh so much you very benevolent being!
Tuesday'sHere chapter 10 . 8/29/2016
Kyu's soulmate? Well she didn't specify which one she kissed! Itachi was on the floor and Kakashi was in an unspecified location, all we know is that she got off the couch and kissed him...whoever him is. Honestly my only thought was it had to be Itachi but she described it to make Naruto think it was Kakashi (notice how she never specified who it was?) so he wouldn't question her about it anymore. Which just makes me so sad! Like really they are soul mates and I want Itachi to be happy no matter what! But then Kyu says something about how soul mates aren't always lovers and yeah I can deal with that. I can be content as long as Itachi is happy but that doesn't mean I wont hurt for what could have been for him.

ahhhhhhh Itachi's soulmate, it is her! Damn the way he explained it my heart damn near burst. He seems content but not completely happy or fully in love, and damn my fangirl heart but I want him to be happy in love! ARGH Dammit so many feels! Mostly the chest pains, yeah mostly those...

AND I MADE IT THROUGH MORE THAN HALF OF THIS CHAPTER BEFORE I REALIZED THAT PICTURE OF ITACHI FUCKING A GIRL WAS HIM FUCKING KYU! Why else would she have it so readily available?! Shit-fuck holy hell I cannot believe that just fucking hit me! Shit shit shit AAAHHHHHHHH damn it I gotta go finish! FUCK!

... I just finished this chapter and may I say right now that the internet will not sufficiently capture the intensity of my feelings or my screaming... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Married? Baby? 11 fucking years they have been unstoppably together? No fucking way! I figured out that they were soulmates but shit-fuck-damn with that much of a twist?! They did all that "hating" and were so convincing that everyone believed it for years and years?! Years of taking down their parents and going behind the backs of everyone we knew just so they could be together and be happy? Move over Romeo and Juliet these two have one mega-fucking-intense love! I can't, I really cannot encompass the sheer emotion of this moment. Of reading Kyu running in there and Itachi bearing all of his love on his face, of those two declaring for their families that they belong together and that nothing, not a fucking thing, will keep them apart. They are so indescribably amazing and beautiful and powerful in their lives and their love and I simply cannot cope.

Thank you, thank you, dear heavens thank you for writing this! For spending who knows how much time creating such an amazing story and not only creating it but sharing it with us. I know the main focus was on Naruto and Sasuke's developing love and discovery of their own soulmates (which btw, oh yes that ending scene was perfection!) but damn Itachi and Kyu stole the show! Please forgive my ramblings and inability to fully explain to you just how wonderful this was, I don't think I have the words to describe just how amazing and intense this story made me feel. You are truly gifted writer and I have been lucky enough to get to read this!
Tuesday'sHere chapter 8 . 8/29/2016
#%Y&$&-Has a simultaneous heart attack-massive nose bleed-drooling-babbling like an idiot-and falling down dead-moment#$#%&_

That picture...that paragraph... of Itachi... I...I just can't even control myself! I will be saving that paragraph because that is the last thing I want to read before the heart attack and blood loss kills me. Nothing more to say than fucking-holy-shit-fuck-damn-sweet Neptune have mercy on this poor fangirl- thank you GOODNIGHT!
Tuesday'sHere chapter 7 . 8/29/2016
Ahahahah ohh Naruto I just love you and your big fat mouth. Sometimes I think the kid needs a brain-to-mouth filter but most of the time it is just too enjoyable to hear the things he says and thinks! Naruto is like the lovable dork that I just want to snuggle and squish cause he's so damn cute, not saying that he can't be hot because he really freaking can, but cute and lovable is just him!

Ahhh it is Itachi's story played out with two characters instead of just him. Instead of just Itachi losing something he loved for his little brother now it is both Itachi and Kyu that have essentially thrown each other away because they loved their little brothers too much. The whole soul mate thing is beautiful and just a testament to the fact that both sets of Namikazes and Uchihas belong together. How Shisui plays into this is interesting but he is always rather important to Itachi and his character development, why be different here? I still hurt for Sasuke more than Naruto on them learning about their siblings past, he just seems to care more. Damn now I feel bad for Itachi and Kyu, no wonder they fully understand each other. I'm not sure just what direction I would like to see their relationship take, no matter what it promises to be intense.

Addictive story and I just can't stop! Thank you for writing this and may I say you certainly know how to write a captivating story!
Tuesday'sHere chapter 6 . 8/29/2016
Why oh why would she call Itachi? While her plans are working they could probably be doing better if she didn't involve Itachi, he's such a protective older brother and while he doesn't seem to be actively trying to keep Naruto and Sasuke separated his appearance is usually counterproductive to her plans. Well maybe not counterproductive but causes tension and stress in Sasuke and between the brothers. She gets a kick out of pissing Itachi off but is that really her only intention in bringing him into the situations?

Holy shit I knew Itachi was a part of Akatsuki (duh) and leading suspicions about Kyu but the confirmation and that they were the best together? WTF best how? Ok I get it when they get serious then shit gets done and together they are damned near unstoppable. Well maybe part of their relationship is explained now.

Also poor Sasuke hearing that, he was obviously hurt and upset learning about Itachi's past it just showed how much he loves his brother. What a time for Naruto to shine though, being level headed and supportive, good job!

Thank you for writing and sharing this with us!
Tuesday'sHere chapter 4 . 8/29/2016
First of all I forgot to mention before how much I enjoy the fact that Kyu and Naruto are named Namikaze. Naruto deserved that name in canon because he was most definitely Minato's son and having his father's name maybe he would have been seen for the hero he was as a child. That would have greatly affected the story I know but seeing a little child being abused for things outside of his control when one small thing such as his lineage or his father's name could have fixed it? Hurts my heart to see it but back to your story.

First chapter with some NaruSasu intentions and yay a nice steamy make-out session, it just makes me wonder where this story will go. It was interesting and fun as all get out before but with the boys starting to lean towards each other just where will it all lead?

Seriously loving this story; the humor, the insanity, the characters are all pulling us deeper into this wild ride. Thank you for writing it!
Tuesday'sHere chapter 3 . 8/29/2016
Again with a half naked Itachi with loose hair? Only a few paragraphs into the chapter? *nosebleeds* ahh excuse me while I take a break from reading about Naruto and Sasuke's morning dilemma to once again drift off into fangirl daydreams...*****mmmmmmItachi...******

Ino and Naruto are fuck buddies?! WTF? Did not see that coming! BBAHAHAHAHAH that's beautiful just freaking beautiful those sex crazy blonds! Gotta say I was not expecting it but I must say it is quite a fun twist!

Shit is going on behind the scenes and I just gotta know what! Onward to the next exciting chapter! Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us lucky readers!
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