| Reviews for Unpredictable |
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  Kenz006 chapter 1 . 4h hahah nice |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/26 He see to much |
 werwolf-yasya chapter 1 . 4/19/2017 Thank so much author, I like this interesting story, sweety Naru. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/6/2017 That was hot! Great job. ;D |
| kagome higurashi chapter 1 . 11/21/2016 please write some more. it's good. |
| Dream-Work-Achieve chapter 1 . 6/29/2016 "You're not the one taking it up the ass"-Naruto Fuck, the funniest and gayest sentence I've read this month. Good job! :D |
| Kid Panther Lover chapter 1 . 6/6/2016 Definitely reading this again |
| Kisaki Sakura chapter 1 . 5/9/2016 I cringed more than I enjoyed this Oneshot. First: they are twelfth, maybe thirteen. For morst this is a phase where they slowly start to develop and get to know their sexuality. The likelyhood of all three of them being comfortable being attracted to other male is slim, actually advancing in sexual activity is even less likely. And when I talk about activity I don't mean knowledge how to properly suck a dick or taking up two dicks in the ass at your first time. Naruto was in pain, you've written about the tears. He likely would have torn trying something like that... without lube no less! Naruto for all we know from the storyline is no fan of perverts, he is even rather innocent, the only way he knows how to exploit the perverts weakness is the sexy no jutsu. And I don't even want to start on the fact that someone of Shikamarus intellect would go along with a scene like that, causing a friend he is interested in pain and than let an other friend just join in? Dear... if this was written when they were sixteen under the influence of alcohol, drugs or a genjutsu I could believe in this plot. But as it seams no, the way you portrayed it: It is closer to child pornography... |
| Pyrane chapter 1 . 10/29/2015 Thanks ! ***Pyrane*** |
| the panda of death chapter 1 . 10/24/2015 this has to be in my top 5 favourite fanfics (and i read a LOT of fanfics) i love the ending (obviously i love the sex too) and how Naruto only looks at shikamaru . but thats so mean of Kiba to axplain everithing IN DETAIL to Hinata CX poor girl xD |
| Thedevilsangel chapter 1 . 10/6/2015 OMG best fanfiction I have ever read involving a threesome between kiba, naruto, and shikamaru. But hot damn that was e most intense and awesome smutty fanfiction ever! |
| Mirage chapter 1 . 9/23/2015 great Story and Pairing, but poor hinata to get told what they did...and sasuke he should not Play Stalker when he does not want to get a eye full of something he may not want to see |
| countrylovinfangirl chapter 1 . 8/25/2015 Amazing! I love it a lot! |
| sakurakhadag chapter 1 . 5/20/2015 Me likey. |
| godess bubbles chapter 1 . 11/24/2014 I loved it! |
