FUCKING CHRIST, DAYUM, WHAAAAAAT DID I JUST READ

JFC. I NEED TO BREATHE, UNFG.

Oh I love Darren/Chris fics. XD

LUCKY FUCKING DARREN CRISS! WHAT I WOULDN'T GIVE TO MEET CHRIS OR DOMETHING!

uuuhhhhhhh! and that's the most coherent thought i could find in the puddle that used to be my brain.

GOD this is dirty...but so, SO hot...I feel guilty reading something this graphic, and yet I can't get enough...one of the best smuts I have ever read on this subject, thank you!

Repeat after me, "Your stories are hott as shit" ;0)

damn it! i want a cigarrete now! LOL just 2 words: FEAKIN HOT!

Holy shit. First Darren/Criss that i've read. Ohmygad. Hottt.

This is my third time reading this and every time I'm just like,

SWEET BABY CHEESUS.

This was hooot.

OH MY GOD...Hot as shit indeed! What have you done to my heart!

Hi Eli

Woah...

Hot stuff honey! Now I know what happens when you are stuck on repeat, repeat, repeat. Hell, we all are there with you. Did you know he had to do that with his parents in the audience in Anaheim. AWKWARD..

I think you have it right. He does get turned on by the thousands of people watching. Who wouldn't? And why woudn't Darren. You never know, maybe?

Thanks for Chapter two. I have been italicizing the speech to differentiate from the narrative, because I find it much easier to follow. I have seen it done in books and decided to do it here. There are other times when I use incorrect grammer or structure to reflect how I think they might actually speak, as opposed to written text. I appreciate the time this takes you to do when you're busy and I will consider each of your comments individually. I need to find one format for speech, narrative and thoughts between the narrative and stick with it.

Keep in mind I have made some changes to the text after the Fifth chapter ( Dinner) so maybe hold off on the Beta for those. Still under consideration. It takes about four read-throughs before I get it the way I want it.

It was our anniversary yesterday. He gave me a nice card and we went out for dinner today. Progress.

Barbara

Hum... I'm really not into RPF, thought I love the idea of this one...

... that was smokin freakin HOT! *fans self*

it was nice, but i do have to say one thing, Darren Criss is straight...so yeah...that made this really awkward.

SWEET JESUS.

This. Is. HOT.

BEST LUNCH BREAK I'VE HAD ALL MONTH.

But now I have to go back to work and pointedly NOT think about the incredible amazing steaming pile of SEX this story was.

DAMN.