I yawned

Great story! It was an awesome ride to be on, and I'm so glad I stumbled onto the trip. The ending was good but I wanted to hear a wrap up of Naruto's situation with Kyuubi. I'm a bit dissatisfied to not know what happens between the two going into the future. Will they have the sort of faux-brothers that their relationship has been progressing towards?

I'm never thought that sasuke have more insults than naruto in this fanfic. Just like usual,naruto's insults are only like dumbass,idiot,stupid,dead-last & anything else that have a same meaning to dobe or usuratonkachi(thin hammer). But idk if sasuke have more lol XD;emo jesus,piss lord,potato,asshole,blind cunt(or something like that), & more from kurama/kyuubi(;)

& i'm was kinda annoyed about the way naruto treating sasuke in hospital after mizuki's ambush. I know if i'm was naruto,i can't accept the fact about that sasuke was the mystery caller after all that time he know everything(& anyway,realization hit me when he keep saying "idiot","moron","dumbass" & something more to naruto becuz he's the 1 & only person who have that habit). But if i'm was him(naruto) at that time in hospital,i'll just accept sasuke's offer about he's tryna help me
& not yelling at him like everything was his fault...with that,not that All kind of shit will happen to sasuke

& honestly,that moment when naruto killed mizuki was not really satisfied me cuz i'm hoping more brutal fight like when naruto went nuts/rampaging with kurama controlling him

Anyway,awesome story! I never thought that i will become this tired when i finish this fanfic...was it becuz naruto keep running away & keep having dark thoughts which they're always makes me worried?

I am sorry but i give up. This story is too fucking mysterious. We are chapt 15 and we know absolutly nothing.
We know that this a no-magic-ninja world.
That this is in high school.
That Naru is not able to remember some 2/3years of his pre high life .
That mizuki is supposed father abuse and rape him for we don't know how long.
That kyuubi is a criminal maybe? For what?
There is a relation btw naru and kyuu but we don't know what.
What the hell is Akatsuki?
I don't quite get that the rookies don't tell some responsible adult that they think Naru got some serious memory laps but I suppose that's your point of view. And teenager can be quiet stupid.
Sasuke is an inconsistant character for
now .
Who is the guy on the phone. Looks like it s Sasu but that would be strange 'cause I would definitly report that my ex best friend gets rape. But again pov.
I don't get that hop like that Naru finaly get the right number for kyuu. WTH?
That's it.
Completly surreal for me.

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I yawned. Guilty.

I just started reading this story today, and I read your msg at the bottom. I read stories like this to cope too, I wasn't raped exactly, but I have been molested more than a few times by multiple people when I was a kid. I've managed to tell some people about it, but i read these types of stories when I need an out. So thank you.

HOLY CRAP THIS IS THE LAST CHAPTER OH EMO JESUS! XD Even at the skating rink boys be hitting on Naruto. Sasuke is such a good boyfriend XD. I really enjoyed the part where their burning all of Mizuki's shit. Awee I love how cute Naruto and Sasuke are together. That scene when Sasuke and Naruto were fornicating in that room was so fucking sexy too bad they never had sex...I've been waiting for a SasuNaru sex scene throughout this entire book and I never got one I'm so disappointed...Well at least their together now... (XD "Because they were both fucked up individuals and together made an incredibly fucked up couple. And it was completely fine like that" I love this ending It kinda reminds me of Killing Stalking ya got some SnagBum XD) FANTASTIC ENDING YOU AMAZING AUTHOR YOU.

I love Kyuubi so much...He's such a fucking genius. Finally Gaara has woken up. It's cute how worried Naruto was over Gaara. So Orochimaru and Danzou were in on all this shit together ughh those Fuckers! I almost completely forgot that their all still in highschool... Of course Orochimaru used to be Jiraiya's best friend... I hate that when Naruto told Kakashi that he killed Mizuki Kakashi instantly thought he was covering for Kyuubi. (Ughh I'm aching for some KakaNaru!) Naruto calling Kakashi a creature made my day. It's so sad that even when Naruto and Sasuke are on their little date some bitch was already planning to do something so mean to Naruto... I can't believe Sasuke bluntly asked if Naruto likes Kakashi XD. I'm very relieved Sai and Suigetsu made up they'd be such a cute couple.

Kyuubi better not go and get himself killed Naruto needs him... The KibaNaru at the barbecue place had me going awee and laughing when Sasuke was all pissed off. XD Kyuubi just killed some people in the library and doesn't give two shits. It's obvious that Kyuubi is the one who saved them.

Awee Itachi is so sweet he left his own eyes in the will so Sasuke could get the surgery to have his sight back... Even though Naruto and Kiba have had sex and are very intimate friends they still seem to make things so normal and casual between each other I love it! They should all trust Kyuubi no questions asked he obviously cares about Naruto if he's willing to jeopardize his safety just to help Naruto. Awee Kyuubi came to see Naruto in the hospital he really cares for Naruto he's like an over protective older brother. Yay Sasuke can finally see again! That SasuNaru make out session was pretty damn intense I thought they were going to fuck on the hospital bed for a second there. XD I like when Naruto h
got all scared from the movie that he was clinging to Sasuke. XD Sasuke got all jealous of Kiba. I hope the gas isn't lethal and it's just knock out gas... I also hope Kyuubi didn't get affected by the gas...

Poor Naruto having to let Mizuki rape him just so he could get a chance to stab the fucker... Naruto killed someone... I FUCKING KNEW OROCHIMARU AND KABUTO WOULD BE INVOLVED! Oh I see now so when Sasuke left he went to Orochimaru... I live how Kyuubi just comes in and knocks Orochimaru and Kabuto out and then calls Sasuke Emo Jesus XD. (I fucking love Kyuubi ughh still need some KyuuNaru). Awee so cute Kyuubi carrying Naruto like a maiden in distress. I love the power Naruto holds over Kyuubi it's Adorable. Sasuke wanting to lay with Naruto is so cute he is being so open with Naruto now and that part when he let Naruto lay on his chest and put his arm around him was so cute! Darn it Sasuke took Narutos place...I really wanted Naruto to keep prostituting! I'm so relieved Kakashi and Gaara are ok. Itachi's will I wonder what he left Sasuke?

Finally Sasuke realizes that chasing after Danzou is a waste of time! How dare Sasuke even think of sacrificing himself Naruto needs him... XD Spontaneously making out in a time of danger. Fucking Mizuki! Naruto really loves Sasuke if he's willing to let that sick fuck rape and torture him again or to death... I can only assume three outcomes ONE Kyuubi came and killed Mizuki somehow...TWO Naruto was tortured and raped to death and just died before Sasukes eyes...THREE Naruto just killed Mizuki...

I hope Gaara and Kakashi end up ok and alive... Naruto is missing/kidnapped now and I don't think a blind Sasuke and an annoying Sakura will help find him at all..Hey but at least Kyuubi is there to help out he seems to know what going on. XD That part when Sakura was talking about Naruto having Sasukes babies. I love Kyuubi so much and his lunatic driving! Kyuubi really did go through a lot to try to find Naruto it's obvious he cares for the little brat. I FUCKING KNEW KYUUBI WASN'T HUMAN ALL ALONG! I really hope Sasuke doesn't go completely blind...Sasuke better not get himself into more trouble. I have the feeling that they are at one of Orochimaru's bases...

That part when Naruto read Sasuke the letter I broke down in tears it was so sad and intense Itachi was such a warm, loving, caring person I hope Sasuke snaps out of his craziness and listens to his brothers last words...I wonder what Tsunade got from that message from Itachi that she told Naruto to leave? Why was Kabuto being weird and saying not to trust anyone that confused me alot? ...I hope to god that Gaara and Kakashi are not dead and that they will be ok...If they die I'm going to lose it... Who was Naruto going after? His stalker? What the hell happened?! Did Naruto finally get kidnapped by his stalker?!