| Reviews for Retroactive |
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   SilverShroud33 chapter 1 . 6/6 That was enormously poignant and sweet with some genuine laugh out loud moments in the middle. Apple of Forbidden knowledge and a sandwich was a particular favourite. |
| mcepl chapter 1 . 1/17 I like it. The biggest problem with writing Luna is how to combine the lunatic and the non-lunatic parts together and make the combination natural. I think you did pretty good job with it. And of course, I am disappointed by that memory charm, but that’s expected, I guess. |
| Patjeeson chapter 1 . 1/8 Wow,just wow |
| Dzarsos chapter 1 . 1/2 Ah, me heart! |
| csheila chapter 1 . 8/18/2019 Beautiful story. Well written, interesting twists, and insightful plot. I will look to see if you have shared other stories |
| Blackstone4005 chapter 1 . 8/16/2019 Delightful story. I loved the interplay of Luna and Harry. They complete one another in unusual ways. Thanks for a fun read. |
| torlan2003 chapter 1 . 6/20/2019 Fun story, thanks for writing |
| BillBrink chapter 1 . 8/17/2018 This was wonderfully done. SO much fun. Thanks for sharing it. |
| The Muse of Apollo chapter 1 . 8/14/2018 Well that ended up being more heartbreaking than I thought it would. |
| mojones2119 chapter 1 . 6/28/2018 Ah so bittersweet! I love Luna and Harry together. |
| tentaclecat chapter 1 . 6/10/2018 This is humor? But then again, people have the strangest sense of what humor is that we ourselves don't know. We chuckle so unexpectedly at something that we didn't know was hilarious no matter how mild we think of it as. Yours particularly stems from how angst and drama is hysterical to you or just flat out give you a "heh" or a "Hehe" moment. |
| BillBrink chapter 1 . 6/3/2018 Thanks for a very creative and enjoyable short fic. |
| stacygrrl2002 chapter 1 . 7/22/2017 Interesting |
| Scabbers1957 chapter 1 . 5/21/2017 WOW, what a surprise ending, very well done. I'll add this gem to my Haruna (Harry/Luna) Community. :)) |
| sunsethill chapter 1 . 5/4/2017 This is one of the best Luna's I've read and shows exactly why I love Harry/Luna but most people can't write it the way I see it. You have been able to capture Luna's brilliantly original mind and show how much Harry would enjoy and understand that. I also loved the Snape voice in his head. I'm not sure I've ever seen someone have Sirius basically commit suicide in the Veil Room and have Harry realize he had done that, but unfortunately, that squares with my perception of canon!Sirius. I'm not sure why I've not run into this story before, but I'm really happy to have found it now. |
