Oh I really liked this, it was like a deep analysis with added story to the film! A wonderful way to look at it with an incredibly enjoyable writing style! :)

''And while Shaw is thinking how beautiful (if untimely) his death is,''
omfg is it just me or is he actually hilarious
great deep fic btw

Hi!_

It's certainly interesting to read Charles' point of view when Shaw dies. But I think it would be quite interesting to see what would happen, if Shaw somehow managed to get into Charles' mind, leave and imprint of himself there, as it were, an imprint that won't fade. Now, wouldn't that be interesting?_

Keep up the good work and please write and post the next chapter a.s.a.p.! I am rather curious as to what will happen next._

good work capturing charles' thoughts during that scene when everything changed between him and erik.

the way you managed to describe his pain, confusion and the irony he feels with erik and the bullet and the end scene was very well done!

thnkx :)

Wow. Beautiful, bloody beautiful story.

Wow. This is super good! I was just thinking about that...about how in the movie, though Charles was screaming when Erik killed Shaw, they didn't even make it seem like it took effort on Charles part, he was still standing and stuff on the beach! But this fic is great: just how I imagined controlling someone should do to Charles! Woo! :)

This was a very sweet fic, lovely writing form and technique :) I'm not sure who you're talking about in the author's note but I'm sorry for your loss, whether it was a character or someone real.

Wonderful writing! :) IYD24

The stream of conciousness was pretty good. Adn are you talking about Moira or Raven at the end?

Poor Charles. :( I love this, nice little ficlet.

This is awesome! I wish I could write like this...