Really good! Quick thinking on Newkirk's part.

Loved it. I liked how you made an unnerving situation humorous. Great work with planning the operation and then the rescue. And the line about hochstetter happy to find someone shorter was the icing on the cake.

Very fun and I liked how Newkirk tricked Lebeau about his ankle (he tricked me too).

Also great twist with the kid. That's something I would have loved to see in an actual episode. LOL

Oh, that was great! So much like an episode! The humor, the suspense, and of course, something going wrong...perfect! Poor LeBeau; I really felt for him. And Newkirk's solution to keep Hochstetter from following them was priceless! Love it!

Oh Newkirk, look what the war's done to you. First it's got you in drag and now you're bribing little childen with stolen money, lol. Love it. Newkirk getting the ladies to remove their shoes was a stroke of genius, and like 80sarcades, I love the addition to the prompt. A fun romp.

The addition to the first line was hilarious! Great work!

Very entertaining, and very much in the spirit of the show, with that lovely mixture of tension and sheer hilarity. Good work.

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A wonderful mission-driven story! I love the ingenuity the characters show through-out. This would have made a great episode.

Nice timing in the story. I loved the suspenseful start section, cut off by the “two hours later.” Made us readers sense dramatic irony as we know what’s going to happen and wonder how it did. I love how you inserted a scene between Newkirk’s joke, and how you juggled all the time throughout the story. Nice job. And what a twist ending with the kid! Nicely alluded to, though :)

For some reason, I kept imagining this as a scene from Ocean’s Eleven, or something like that – with some sneaking into a big hotel, and others waiting outside, next to a fountain, at night. LOL! I keep on thinking they’re in a big white, unmarked van :) But it was a cute story.

Really loved the story!That was some really fast thinking on Newkirks part and plus the well developed freindship between Newkirk and LeBeau .I like how Newkirk took LeBeau's feelings into consideration. True surprise ending nice Wolfie distraction.

Oh, I loved this! The in media res/flashback combo worked very well for this. And I'm glad that someone else brought up LeBeau's claustrophobia!

LOL, I loved LeBeau's out-and-out refusal to be the one to disguise himself as a woman. Newkirk's reaction to the costume is perfect and priceless. And the banter between the two corporals is perfect, as well.

"Charging extra for the high heels." LOL!

And oh, what a tense part near the end! And poor LeBeau, having to deal with his claustrophobia on top of all that! And poor Newkirk, too, dealing with his problem...

But the way it was resolved was perfect! Classic Newkirk!

Eep, a fear of mine - trapped in an elevator. Fantastic and clever story, very well done.

Love the way Hogan takes charge when things go wrong, assess the situation, and fixes the problem! But all of the guys can think on their feet; Newkirk getting all the women in the elevator to remove their shoes to conceal his lack of a shoe was priceless.

Not to mention the bribing of the bratty little Ernest. Poor Hochstetter...

Very good. Newkirk is in top shape, really smart ! And I love when a story is focused on the duo Newkirk-Lebeau. I think they have a really strong friendship, which is proved here :)

Just a correction, if it can help : "a piece of cake" become in french "un jeu d'enfant" (chid game) translations are not always litteraly.

Boy, what an adventure! Those guys are going to be so tired when they get back. The characters were just like how they are on the show. Great job!