I hope you continue to write this story! I'm in love with it!

This fanfic deserves so much more praise than its getting. The plot and the characters are written extremely well.

Plizz plizz continue. Its beatiful. Keep writing please :)

I love this fanfic

please continued!

xoxo

Good luck sorting it out, I'm looking forward to it. And Charles seems to be getting more and more distant with the kids, but maybe that's just me.

I love the story. Cant stant the suspence though. Will Eric and Charles always be on different sides? coz it would be a complete waste if they did. Cant wait till the next chapter. Update as soon as possible please.

Argentum Umbra

Bummer on the fact that you guys are going on Hiatus :(, but I bet when you come back it'll be an awesome chapter . Hope you muse comes back soon! I adore your Sean and love him to bits, and I like that Alex actually went to talk to Hank. Poor Hank and Alex, love them both :), love your story and can't wait for that next chapter!

Why is Hank/Alex so cute? Seriously, it shouldn't be possible.

It sucks to hear about your writing struggles, I wish you both the best in sorting it all out. :)

This has been sitting open, waitin for me to come up with the words to express it's awesomeness. I've decided there are no words. It's so well written, with the intertwining plots giving it the depth a lot of fanfic lacks. I absolutely adore it, and hope more comes soon!

awww nice i liked it poor hank though still not use to the new him i feel for the guy great job though i loved it

Oh gosh... I can't believe it took me this long to get to this! Lifes been crazy - I have exams next week. This just made my day, which has been spent studying, so so so much better. Not impressed with Sage right now though... And I can't decide if I expected her and Bishop's relationship or not. Love Charles and Eric as always - their interactions are priceless. Can't wait for more!

How do you write a collab fic? Surely the process would take much longer and would get seriously stressful at times.

.. That said, I do like your fic. :) Its sweet and cute, I like how you've inserted dates though I can't help feel that it's a bit unrealistically fluffy at times. Please update when you can.

That was a low blow from Sage D:

I want to hold Charles ;u; I'm glad Erik eased his worries. Thank you for the update! Looking forward to reading more.

oh wow damn i just loved it so far poor charles nd erik though so much agaisn thtem

Great story. Don't mean to nit pick, but the expression is "once in a while", not "once and a while".