| Reviews for Heartbeat |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2019 Cute |
 AggresiveFangirling chapter 1 . 8/18/2017 Ooooooh |
| AMProngs chapter 1 . 6/11/2017 Hot! |
| ProfEvans chapter 1 . 6/4/2017 This was fantastic! There were a few moments where verb tense switched, but that was my only complaint... no, I had one other: it wasn't enough! I NEED MORE! Seriously, great job! ESPECIALLY considering it was your first smut! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2017 xc |
| BookwormishDragon chapter 1 . 7/14/2016 Sirius teasing Lily is like the best thing ever, so thanks for including that! |
| ohsosirius chapter 1 . 2/12/2015 i really liked it :) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2014 Fantastic! You had my heartbeat mounting with every line! Give us more! :) |
| a chapter 1 . 7/25/2014 Very good smut |
| caribbeanblues chapter 1 . 7/15/2014 This is amazing. I rarely read smut because I don't like how people write it, especially when it comes to James/Lily. But you did a really great job. |
| horsegirl275 chapter 1 . 2/20/2014 Fantastic for a first time writing smut, just fantastic in general! |
| Kathleen Kelly chapter 1 . 11/8/2013 This is perfect. Tasteful smut is the best smut. And I love how you ended it with them saying "I love you". I don't know, that just feels right. |
| Mug chapter 1 . 7/25/2013 Good good good. I couldn't tell it was first time. :) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/15/2013 Wow. This is how you write smut, people. This is perfect. Love it. |
| artists chapter 1 . 11/8/2012 Hey, that was awesome. I never ever read smut, well you know, moral and ethical reasons but if you skip the smuts, it's amazing! Gonna check out you other fics for sure. xoxo Dazzled |
