If this wasn't GOOD, I don't know what is.
That was wonderful how you brought us through Raven/Mystique's life, different stages, situations, and let us meet the girl. Really meet her.
Stellar job.

I know that you prob won't continue this story. But as someone who's watched all 6 films, I just want to comment that both stories SEEM to be in different universes... I'd like to believe that Raven would not poison Charles like that.

I just love these two together! Romantic or otherwise, their love was portrayed well. If only, the more recent X-men movies deepened their development more.

Ooooooooh! Girl, this... THIS. I enjoyed reading all of the chapters, really, but I almost stopped reading it when I got to a rather controversial beggining of chapter 3... Yet I wanted to read the rest. AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT I DID. The last chapter is... what can I say. It's the perfection. It's... amazing! I am so grateful that you wrote it. Well, well done! You see, I actually sobbed while reading it. And when I say I sobbed I mean it. I REALLY did sob. And I don't recall many fanfics (if any) which could do this to me. I often had a teary eyes, yes. But to sob? You made me sob, and congratulation. An amazing piece of work.
Have a beautiful day!

WHy do you make me cryyyyyy! But this was so good.

Argh this last chapter was heartbreaking ahhhhhhh but the story was good overall and very well written, thank you for sharing it with us.

I just cried so hard..

You should do a story where Raven doesn't leave.

Simply Amazing, that is all I can say about this story.

Thank you for writing it.

love it.

Feels short, probably because it was that good.

Good characterization.

This had some good feelings in it. Those poor confusing characters.

A lot of things happened here... and they worked well.

Hmmm... good man, I think you are up to something here!

good stuff