I wonder what's next...

Please continue this. This and Wings, they're both great. Depressing as all hell, but fantastic an original and clever and beautiful all the same. Wings almost had me in tears, and there's a part of me that wants you to continue it, to make it a full story where Arthur DIDN'T disappear just yet, or to see his fight against his Reaper while he was trying to protect Alfred - I digress. The point is, while part of me wishes for something like that, the POSSIBILITY of a happy ending, I'd be totally fine with however you decide to play it. It's your story after all, and it was amazing the way you decided to write it, so... I guess all of this rant was pointless. THE POINT IS, both Wings and this were wonderful, and seeing as this one isn't done, I'm hoping you'll finish it.

...Fail review is ending now. Wonderful job!

- Silence

(ps thing - on the other Angels: I'm pretty sure te cassanova is Francis and the Nazi is Ludwig, and I THINK the killer is Ivan, but I was wondering if Gilbert would be included, being a possible candidate for the Nazi Angel role, and also being Luddy's bro. ...this is a really stupid question, so feel free to completely ignore me. XD)

I rather enjoy this; the way it's all sporadic and uncapitalized words and such. It gives the story a nifty, chaotic feel which makes it feel a hell-of-a-lot more real-like we're in Arthur's head.

A little tip though, that giant explanation at the bottom; one of the major things (supposedly) about being a good writer is 'show, don't tell', and that's what you basically did. I'm not saying that you have to change anything (gosh no, this is your story and I'll still read it if you change it or if you don't), I'm just pointing it out. I'm not even sure how you'd fix it (or the back story part at least). I picked out that he was being raped; I didn't find it too hard to figure out (but I apparently have a knack for ruining stories for people. I find little things in the words that explains more than most people get and it ruins stuff for them. It's not like I mean to do it...:\).

Anyway, I really like what you're doing here, and, aside from the whole 'show, don't tell' thing, I find it unique.

(And, you don't have to take what I said to heart -please, don't- or even think about it. I'm just saying, maybe there was/is another way of saying it that gets it across better than just putting it out there. But, then again, those are just my thoughts. Do what you want; it's your story.)

*in tears* will Alfred and Artie ever see eachother again?

*o* whoa... OH SHNAP WHO DA REAPER O.o

Oh my goodness, your writing is so beautiful.

There's really nothing I can say that won't come across as creepy... but I seriously can't wait for the next chapter, and this is a really interesting look at our world, and how much could be going on that we don't know and so on and so forth.

"([...] but is it murder if the victim is already dead?)"

Asdkfhaks, tearing at my heart, dearie.