Holy Shit now that was one hell of a first chapter.

Shaking my head . Edward edward edward . I love Bella . Edward its mixed emotions . Even though its early in the story im still enjoying it : ) . Welp , off to the next chapter .

Oh my god! Definitely a clit wrecker! Please gimme more ! :D

i want more please i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) i love Bella & Edward together

Please update soon! I've been dying to see what happens with Edward and Bella and the wait is getting to me! PLEASE update!

Awww poor bella and Edward

Can't wait for the next up date

Wow I really the story specially nerdy Bella and inked Edward! Hope you update soon :D

I NEED MORE! Really, don't leave us hanging here. Pleeeeez?

Wow. So. Freaking. Hot.

Awesome Update!

completely enjoying this story. I hope it updates soon.

I just started reading this. It is very cute. I thought it was a little weird her inner voice had a name, but I am guessing that she won't talk to her as much after she gets used to Edward. I feel bad for Bella though. She probably has to see him with all his hookups.

I have to say, as funny, and sexy the first couple chapters were, I liked this one MUCH better. The inner monologue was getting overwhelming, especially coming from two different perspectives, of the same person. Like Bella says, "it gets loud in there" )

This was much more structured, and the inner voices were there, but did not take up the whole of the chapter, and now your writing skills take center stage, and can shine. I do enjoy the sarcastic humor between the "2 Bellas", so more of that would be cool. As the next few chapters are already updated, I suppose I shall see.

I get the feeling from the seriousness of the AN that something happened to disrupt the duo author idea? Well, maybe it was for the best. This chapter is much better.

OH wow...that was amazing! I cannot wait to see what happens now!

What do I get for taking off a couple days from fanfic? Awesomeness in my inbox ! Ugnh 2am insomnia has never been Sooo good ;-) Can't wait for the next chapter and maybe the reasons behind her transformation...