Reviews for Veils of Deceit
Guest chapter 20 . 10/22/2019
Hi! Your plot is fantastic and I really think this story deserves way more recognition. Thank you for writing 3
Guest chapter 17 . 10/22/2019
You're a genius and I love your writing
Marisol rdz chapter 20 . 6/18/2019
Por favor denos el último capitulo, en verdad escribe muy bien y me gustan sus historias sasunaru, ojalá encuentre pronto la inspiración.
Marisol rdz chapter 20 . 4/18/2019
Me encantaron sus historias,esperare tu actualización para quedar ahora si muy feliz y contenta en verdad eres muy buena en tus escritos.
Marisol rdz chapter 20 . 1/27/2019
Ojala y pronto actualices, personalmente me encantan tus historias sasunaru, eres de los mejores escritores de esta pareja que he leido.
Guest chapter 20 . 11/1/2018
Please update soooooonnn
Prami chapter 20 . 10/18/2018
Oh my gish an update thanks so much been waitinv for one for yeaaars...
Meehalla chapter 20 . 7/9/2018
I personally really liked this chapter! I remember how your story could wrench my heart out of my chest. It always gets me when Sasuke or Naruto hurt because the other is dead. How you write Sasuke shows how he loves Naruto with every fibre or his body. Everything he do is for Naruto and his family. Now I’m hearing they will get to add another little one! Which got me soooo happy!
Thank you for updating. I’m really glad to know that you will be finishing the story.
Camille.Ad0 chapter 20 . 7/7/2018
Hello, well it shows that your not too fan of fighting sceenes so well It was not easy to picture. Also it' was okay.
Waiting for the next chapter. )
Camille.Ad0 chapter 19 . 3/21/2018
Wow way to cliffhander!
So, I did not post any rewiew on the first part of this story because it was good but far too many things that hindered the reading. You should really beta the story there is even chunks of sentences missing there...

This volume seems to be far much better. Still few mkstakes here and there but it s alright . You had me copletly surprised with the resurection of naruto. I did not expect it one bit ! But I thinl it was greatly done ). You pull it off out of nowhere and actually it was quite a relief . Because I seriously thought this was a death fic. Sasuke would have killed himself after was done with Oroboros.
The only thing I did not like was in the prequel. The chunin exam part was too much ooc for me. How the hell would naruto not participate when it s three men team and all that shit. You shoul have explain maybe. Also what about Akatsuki . We know kisame died but there was obviously other proeminants members to kill or make joined cause with.

I am also wondering about Itachi's abikaasa and if it would have something to do with how unemotional je could be about Asuka or how protective about Sasuke and Naru.

All in all I hope there will be some next chap soon. )
Ganbarimasu!
Kitsune Megami no Unmei chapter 19 . 8/10/2017
Please make my wish come true! Make Asuka live! Please! Update soon. Poor Asuka
Sakuras0Temper chapter 19 . 7/23/2017
NO! you can't stop the story there! the amount I have cried during this! what happens next? Update asap please!
Kitsune Megami no Unmei chapter 19 . 5/7/2017
Is Asuka dead? O.O It would be so cool if some how she turned Into a baby again in Naruto's stomach. But then again it wouldn't make sense. Hmmm... Pls update soon! I love this story and the previous one. I hope that you can get a new story updated soon!
hyugesoo chapter 19 . 3/25/2017
Cries.
Guest chapter 19 . 2/17/2017
I want more, please
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