Why would you write nami going through such a horrendous ordeal , fuck this shit

God I fucking hate you for this

Please don't give up on this story. I've waited years. I hope to see this story come to an end. This story is amazing. Hope to hear from you soon. Dont mind me, Im just gonna reread this over again.

i read through the horrible fate Nami had to went through, but where's the romance worthy of all of that?:(

I really love this story! I think it's the first fanfic I've ever cried to! I'll be faithfully waiting for you to update as I've been since I started reading your masterpiece. it does not matter even if you update it 10 years later. I'll still be here!

I really want Luffy and the crew to find out what Nami went through. Maybe the villain could explain it in some way?

Please update this amazing story soon

I was so excited to see this updated! I really love how you've portrayed everyone so far, especially Luffy and Zoro. I can't wait for those bastards to get whats coming to them!

Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

sensuallettuce~

Ahh! You updated! D I mean, I know this story is all dark and tragic and stuff but I cant help getting all giddy when I see a new chapter from you. It looks like we get our first taste of what the dead-crew-walking (cause that's what they are when Luffy gets his hands on them) is up too and it turns out they're nothing but mercenaries. So, who's the bastard behind the bastard? Cant wait to find out.

Rarely such dark scenarios are found at ffnet - you've succeeded in creating a dark and desperate picture that makes one shiver in terror and despair ... Captain Tierviq is an OC, right? I kind of wonder who's the one to pull the strings unseen ...
Anyway, a great debut into the fandom, if depressing as well.
I hope this won't be the last One-Piece-story from your feather that will fascinate us!

Glad that you are back :3
I love this story so much and I hope to read more! Write when you can and when you want:) no pressure!
I hope Nami gets better but I dont think those pirates want that! Omg, you want to keep me waiting hahaha i can die right now, i need to know what will happen and if my Nami-chan will be okay
I will wait to the next chapter happily
Luffy and Nami are the best ;)

Awesome story! I really like how the story progress. Poor nami, but i hope she could make it through and smile again

Nice chapter! Hope nami gets through everything

Poor Nami! However I like the protective crew angle of it! Great chapter loved it! :D

omg u have no idea how excited i am to get an update for this story! i really love this fanfic so please finish it i beg u!