Wow. Just. Wow. This is incredibly powerful. I love it! It is so artistic, but sad. :) :( I don't even know what to do with all of these feels! It's so cool! :D But it's so sad! :'( This is truly amazing, and I hope you have more things like this. In fact, I'm going to check your profile right now. Thank you so much for writing such a beautiful piece and allowing me to view it! You are awesome!

I'm on a bit of a hunt for one shots about Severus and Lily and that was exactly what I was looking for. I've written one with the same kind of theme, yet from Severus's POV, yet I'm not too sure how sucesfull I was.

Good job!

I love Lily and Severus stuff. It always makes me want to cry. SO GOOD!

Nearly two weeks ago this was posted, and I am yet to review! Shame on me, getting behind on this.

Well, now that I've finally gotten to reading and reviewing this, I'm not at all disappointed. Drabbles, one-shots, multi-chapter, freeverse-what can't you do brilliantly? As always, wonderful. Keep up the great work.

This is a beautiful lingering picture of Lily and Sev- well done. But I think you may have overdone the formatting just a little :) MSx

wow very powerful

Great poem! U should do poetry more often! I thought it was reallllllly good. Please keep writing! :D

*sob*

They could've been such an awesome couple. And this sounds weird, but the poem is really pretty. :)