Yeah, Bullshit. Naruto has more than a right to be pissed, and Jiraya does NOT have a right to pull that shit on him. Yes he was busy, could he have visited, undoubtedly. He was in the middle of investigating Orichimaru AND the Akatsuki whenever he first met Naruto, he had more than enough opportunities, so no Jiraya does not get to pull that shit on Naruto.

PAIN NOT PEIN! Pain is the official translation of the name while Pein was only used by fan translators before the official name was revealed.

To the guest below, shut your dumbass up. The point of this shit was how the fuck the smart Ass got promoted, but Naruto didn’t. Now why don’t you go back to the corner, and continue sucking cack like your limpdick father does, while your mother get gangfucked six ways to Sunday like the two cent crusty cunt she is, “bruh”?

Bruh, you really tried downplaying why Shikamaru got promoted, didn’t you?

He didn’t just give up against a superior opponent, he also uses good tactics like:

Instantly dropping smoke bombs the moment the match started to find cover.

Or purposely stalling for time so the sun could get higher and his shadow could have more range.

Or the parachute he made to extend his shadow further.

Or how he used the parachute as a distraction to mover her closer the hole from Naruto’s fight to capture her in his shadow.

Dude almost one against a superior opponent with nothing but big brain energy. Meanwhile Naruto tries to throw hands against a Hyuga and was getting stomped for 90% of the fight before plot kicked in and made Neji spout his tragic backstory instead of knocking Naruto out.

And why would Kakashi teaches Naruto the Chidori? You need a Sharingan to counteract the tunnel vision. He’d be giving Naruto a jutsu he basically couldn’t use.

Amigo, tenes algo en el cerebro, ¿ verdad?.
analizamos, si alguien es 2 veces mas fuerte que tu, significa que necesitan 2 personas como tu, y si este también es 2 veces mas rápido, 4 o mas ya que los puede vencer fácilmente individualmente, súmele mas experiencia, por lo tanto si es mas fuerte en varios aspectos, pero piensas que esto es dragon ball.

You goddamnit whore update

Your numerical shinobi ranging system is garbage, it's a complete joke. With there only being 10 categories with a max score of 5 for each, the absolute best shinobi is 100. Obviously Itachi is very strong, but he's by no means the best there ever was, so he's definitely below that number... Say 90. And you expect me to believe that Sasuke as he is in this chapter, at 29 score, that three or four Sasuke's could match or best Itachi? Yugito? Kakashi? Killer Bee?

Your ranking system is absolute garbage, you put zero thought into it.

I love the fact that u promoted naruto to chunin ? I dont know if that is how you spell it but yea

You failed!
Go suck on dick and die!
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I genuinely hate the Orochimaru batch, because the villains just don't fucking die. Like, they should be dead, why do they have such strong plot armor. Like, he got atomized, he can't come back from that, and then he does anyway. It makes stories so uninteresting, bc his are they gonna die later? Get atomized squared?

I promise you if Kabuto is alive he has the greatest plot armor to ever exist.

Your story is kinda really pushy about equal rights between men and women which I think is sad it reduces the immersion of the story

Please continue this story. I know it has been years but it is really good.

I love your fic but tbh I don't really like Rei (or the other OC in Naruto's team). Really hope they aren't going to stay that long

Why does Naruto needs to be 21 to drink? I'm practically sure that the only country stupid enough to do it is rge USA