Whoa. Whoa. I'm panicking sorta. Naruto can't leave Sasuke - not forever at least. but i guess since it's been two years since you updated..

Please update asap!

Naruto is worse than that dick of a boyfriend Sasuke ditched. He is very selfish and only thinks of protecting himself instead of understanding the repurcussion of what kind of pain he is going to put Sasuke through. He is just a plain coward.

This story is amazing, I hope you update soon (:

However, I do agree with Jen. (Meh. Reviewing out of order, I'm such a silly.)

Your first person narratives are breathtakingly wonderful. I LOVE that about your stories.

But your Sasuke... Feh. Jen explained it well.

BUT I STILL LOVE YOUR STORIES. COOKIE FOR YOU.

I feel like an idiot. I suck at this.

Sigh.

I'm sorry. :(

THIS CAN'T BE CAN THE END, CAN IT? NARUTO, YOU CAN'T LEAVE HIM THERE! D:

But it's a very good story x)

Can I be honest with you? You are an excellent writer and the emotions your characters go through always feel so real. I want to like your stories more than I do, but the problem is, your ukes are always the same in every story: no confidence, shy, and emotionally fragile. It's like reading an even worse version of Hinata over and over again. No matter who you have on the bottom, whether it's Sasuke or Naruto, the character always ends up beaten down in some way. (As a fan of these two, it's kind of sad to see.)

I don't mind it so much in a story like FAT since there is a very clear reason why Sasuke is the way he is (his weight has done a number on his self-esteem), but why, in a story like this one, must Sasuke be the same way? Plenty of people have experienced unrequited love, and plenty of people have hidden their sexuality (and plenty of people have done both). The response to both situations doesn't have to be (and isn't usually) for the person to become so emotional and so feminized. Canon Sasuke is strong, brash, and confident. None of that is here. (With his stutter and his fragility, he might as well be Hinata and not Sasuke.)

As I said before, if all your ukes weren't like this, I wouldn't notice it as much, but they are, so I do. It should be OK for ukes to keep their canon personalities, and not just semes, shouldn't it? Whether a man or woman prefers the receiving end in a same-sex relationship doesn't necessarily indicate anything about his/her personality outside of the bedroom. (And indeed, most same-sex couples don't have set top/bottom roles in the bedroom, and among those who do have a preference, most prefer bottom rather than top.)

My point in saying all this is, let your ukes be themselves, whatever kind of personality that canon self may have. Don't always feminize them to this extent. And if you do wish to play with their character types a bit, don't always play with their character types in this exact same way.

I feel like I could just marry your writing style right now. My gosh how happy I am I found you. Your language is very easy on the eyes and your plots intriguing. It's the perfect combination!

Usually I don't go for stories based on (only) sexual content however, I must say I'm glad I gave this one a chance. It's really good. Sasuke's quite OOC, Naruto too for that matter, but not to the point it gets annoying. All in all, I must say your story is awesome(!) and I hope you'll update sometime soon! Thank you~

haku.

Wow just wow, I'm left speechless.

Reading this is like riding on an emotional roller-coaster.

I really hope to see the update soon, please TT

Very good start! Looking forward to this story it sounds great update soon.

How very daring of you to write this under the nose of, who knows, maybe your siblings? It's a good chapter with lots of description, but wow. Naruto is a jackass.

Anyways, I think this should be rated "M" now because it is really explicit. Great job, I look forward to the next chapter :)

You have an outgoing first-person perspective going on, which makes a fun read, but it does get a little confusing when you put them all in a single paragraph. That's just my own personal complaint, so don't take it too seriously.

I like how the story is going and I think how you write Naruto's first person perspective suits him very well. The length of the chapter is pretty good too. Keep up the good work :)

D:GAH! NEXT CHAPTER! (poor Sasuke...)

Wow...Sasuke on the bottom...still it was hot. So when is Naruto going to stop being a dumbass and realize he loves him back? Poor Sasuke!

I think you did a wonderful job at diving into Naruto's thoughts about Sasuke's homosexuality. His thought process seemed real and genuine, I could imagine a person thinking some of his thoughts if they found out their best friend was gay. And don't let me get started on Naruto's arousal to the entire situation, especially when they were so close to having sex! I love how he was confused and so unsure of his feelings—it just made the story so real to me!

Overall, great job. I hope that there's more coming our way with this story, because—well you know, everyone loves multi-chapter NaruxSasu stories!