I can't get enough of this. There are some really talented writers on this site.

impressive, and s'mores are yummy, i don't think this should just be a oneshot

For some reason, I love fics like this one... call me sadistic if you want.

I LOVE THIS! Wonderful work!

Ahhh... poor yuki... i still liked the story though..

(Throws vase at Akito) Akito's my favorite character but he needs to LOOSEN UP!

Awwwww Poor Yuki. Well done.

Aaah poor Yuki I love him! Damn you Akito! You cow! (sorry Hatsu!)

You pretty much nailed it i think! That's impressive for a first fanfic. Or a second! Or last!

*sobs* Y-Yu-chan... My poor darling Yu-chan...

It was a lovely story! I'm over at my end of the computer wanting to write more Yuki angst. *scolds self* I write too much of it, I probaby shouldn't. Nope, too late, I can't just stop however terrible that makes me. Anyway, I loved you story! And I'm adding it to my community (Inside A Dark Room) about Yuki's past. Just so you know, since you won't get an email or anything about it.

Also, as another person who writes this type of thing... Is it just me or is the hardest part writing Akito's dialogue? I feel terrible writing it; as I'M the one saying it. I get so depressed writing lovely lovely (repeat intended) angst just like this. Don't mind me, I'm rambling.

That's your first FF?

I think it was realy, realy great!

Please write more!

sadly i loved it considering yuki is my faveorite charater but that was good thanks :P

Good job!

*sniff sniff*

XD

You already know my views on this, sis, but I thought I'd give you a kickstart XD

Anyway, it is an awesome story, very well written.

(and I understand it better now - I'm on episode 12. Yes, I'm watching them)