Reviews for Not a Perfect Love Story
FATIMA harun chapter 44 . 7/27
Wow I really really really liked your story ️️it has sadness ️ love ️drama, action and lots more your a ginuos un all my reading this has been the best of all I can't even explain in words how I love this story so much ️️
Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2018
It was so dramatic but I loved it you are a great story writer
deepika chapter 44 . 10/10/2016
Hi there , great storry...
anushkagautam90 chapter 44 . 9/12/2016
This is awesome story seriously...pan is just so in character and a kickass as that...but u shouldnt have to make trunks a cheater dat was too much he loves pan more than anything but it was ok in the end i was happy go...nice ending and storyline good work
Amasha chapter 44 . 5/30/2016
I like this story so so so much thank for the story
Guest chapter 44 . 7/11/2015
this is a really good story, although i think you lost the charector persoanlitys that are shown in GT and in DBZK
trunks-pan33 chapter 19 . 7/10/2015
thats so funny, rajen fell in love with pan and all she wants to do is rip out his sole and stomp on it
Guest chapter 44 . 6/17/2015
Please make a sequal with Hope. I loved this story so much. It is so amazing. Thank you for writing this story. It was the best story I have read so far. Thank you.
Pansaiyanlovers chapter 44 . 1/25/2015
The story lines is interesting...but i HOPE that PAn will not forgave Trunks...and let her have another male...and Trunks will die slowly in pain and hearbreak...I prefer Pan with Vegeta..I love them both together...! Trunks was DAMN male...BAD JERK!THE HELL JACKASSHOLE!Same as MARRON..as I really hate her character even she played a good one..she such SLUT!ANNOYING BITCH!DAMN HOLE!I really hate more if that PIG TRUNKS play together with LOVELY PAN and BITCH MARRON...
Guest chapter 44 . 1/25/2015
I really love PAN character in any fiction stories..I really pissed with Trunks...he was such damn male...! I really hate him! So bad jerk!PIG! I really hope that Pan will not forgave him in this stories and have another male...let Trunks die slowly because of heartbreak and Pan will be more happy than together with Trunks...I am prefer Pan with Vegeta...he is the best loyal male in any fictions...Beside than Trunks the 2nd character I hate..the most I hate is Marron! Even she play a good character..still I hate her...!and even I hate more if Trunks play together with Marron and Pan...
Guest chapter 1 . 11/15/2014
good awsome
Nightchanges chapter 5 . 8/27/2014
This chapter was touching indeed it made me cry anyways keep up with h the good work
princessarmstrong chapter 1 . 7/21/2014
Omfg I luv yr story I read it b4 I kno bout fanfic so I Clint lead a review but I really liked yr story nd yr way of writing
sapphire 101 chapter 5 . 4/26/2014
Maybe we should have more details on pan's raping
Karina chapter 44 . 1/16/2014
This is like the best story ever it made me cry I have read so many storys and never replied so this should be a honor!
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