This is nothing short of fantastic!

i like the plot,and just wondering where the setting is taking place, like is it in the beginning of the movie or something? not to sound to demanding but consider making it a full length story , and i too am in love with those characters being shipped together. I'm a little upset that there is not enough fan fictions of the two characters.i love your story and hope you can write/update soon, no pressure.

I love this fic. Mrs. Frisby and the Rats of NIMH was one of my first experiences with real characterization, and you haven't disappointed me. I know you won't update, so there's no point in asking for that...

Hey dude I sent you a PM recently and I must say this story is probably gone by now. But if you'd like me too I would be happy to finish the story for you if you can send it to me on a Word Document. Also how did you intend for it be especially with the whole lemon thing. Honestly you never see a NIMH fanfic like this you should continue it it's awesome

Sorry I didn't log in correctly that was me that wrote that guest comment. Anyway think about what I said and I'd be happy to help.

Hey dude I think you should try updating this story even after this long, like three years. This is a very well written NIMH story and I would really like to see what happens in the following chapters. If you don't want to update this story that's fine but I really think that you should because this is a really well written fanfic based off the Secret of NIMH.

This story is stunning and amazing. No spelling errors, completely in character, cuteness...good gosh, this story is awesome. Please update soon, I'm eager to see what happens next! Pleeeease!

update soon... Please!

This is a great piece of literature. You can feel Mrs. Brisby and Jonathan are so in love! Great job on the dialogue as well as the sweet things that went on between the couple. Really a sweet sweet experience. Very loving. Great job on the kids too. I can't wait for another update.

Very interesting it was a very unusual movie in a good way and your giving it justice please update oh and LEMON LEMON LEMOM !

Its nice to see a pre-Secret of NIMH story, especially one that has such an important yet underrepresented character in it. Looking forward to the next installment

Yay, first chapter! :3

I love it so far! You kept everyone very in-character, and kept to the spirit and main theme of the movie/book. Family.

Jonathan and Elisabeth are so in love, you can deffinately tell! They make such a sweet pair. You did great filling in the couple plot-holes presented so-far, regarding Mrs. Brisby's first name, and how Jonathan acquired the magic Stone.

I can't wait for more~

-Kris