Reviews for Coming Out |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the concept you have but I just can't get past all the typos and grammatical errors. If you ever clean this up I would be more than happy to read this but as it is I'm getting a headache. Sorry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just now noticed that the names of all the chapters have been lines from American Pie |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg this is amazing! Update more please! :-D |
![]() ![]() I can't wait until the next update! After all, it's the big reveal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story so far cant wait to see what they plan on doing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad you updated! :D I was just thinking about this fic today... |
![]() ![]() ![]() First of all, I'm glad that you've updated! Secondly, now I can't WAIT until the Countries reveal themselves! Ooh! I know the PERFECT song for that chapter! "Our Time Has Come" from Cat's Don't Dance! *plays that song* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh~ interesting. Very interesting. This is a type of story I have not read before. I will be waiting with anticipation for your updates. :) |
![]() ![]() Lols poor America... I love England's true thoughts |
![]() ![]() ![]() who are michael and amanda? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awsome chapter, I can't wait for more!...one thing, I'm pretty sue it's "doubted" not "doughted"...just wanted to point that out...if that's just a different spelling or somethin, please feel free to correct me. . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, all that happened was Arthur dreamin', but why did Arthur dream of Los Angeles burnin'? |
![]() ![]() ![]() what just happened im confused but i love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...dude, that so called 'riot' was majorly overblown by the media. the pple who started it were NOT canucks fan. they went down there with gas masks and baseball bats. and the media BARELY if not not at all mention that there were pple trying to make a human wall/barrier around like the shops and stuff and how like tons of pple went down town the next day to help with the clean up and all that. heck there even is a charity/fun raiser thing going on (though i dont know much about it) to help the small businesses that were affected |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pfffft. Every world meeting is fun. XD |