Cute at the end...

She turned into a crackwhore awfully fast. And it sure did take her a unbelievably long time to detox.

I really don't care for this story. Bella the used up prostitute with no self esteem? Not very appealing.

It was an interesting start. I wish it had continued

I don't get why she doesn't dislike Rosalie more. Who fucking cares about Rose. She's a stupid bitch who had to be FORCED into admitting she was wrong. Forced.

I don't get it. Esme left as well. Esme called Bella her daughter, and then she left. You don't leave your children behind. Bella should hate Esme as much as the others. From what I see, only Jasper is the only one who should be hated less

Finally a Bella who doesn't look at Edward and forgives him instantly.

YeS I am so excited for this story!

Fabulous! I hope there's more to come!

This is one of the *very best* "broken Bella" stories out there. I read it several years ago and just reread it today and I really, really hope you add to it. The pacing is terrific, the characterizations are spot-on, and the anger and sadness you have given them to deal with is pitch-perfect (and THANK YOU for not having Bella forgive him in 2 flat seconds. I *love* this Bella!). You may not still be writing, but you should be; as a former publishing professional, I recognize good writing when I see it. :)

Please keep writing - and add on to this story when you can. They're at such an interesting point in their new relationship, I can't wait to see what you do next! Thank you for this story! :)

Oh I'm so sorry you're not writing for any fundraisers now, because I really like this storyline and your writing and I want more of this! I know it's been forever, but I don't care - please consider continuing this story! :)

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