*cries*

gahh!
To sad!
(sorry.)
It's a great story, but it's really sad!

...KYAAA!

(It's a Japanese fangirl scream.)

Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

Kyaa!

NYAAAAA

THE FEELS. POOR CILAN. Oh my. I'm shivering x3 that really was great. A little different from my own theory, but still completely believable. I love it!

This was Amazing! Just what I had been looking for! Thanks! But, this could stand to have a sequal parhaps... But overall, Loved it!

A very sad fic, I really feeled sorry for Cilan at end. Is this fic complete, or will there be continuation? Becouse it's quite good.

:'( This makes me feel so bad for Cilan... At first it's hard to believe Ash would be so quick to turn on a friend, but then again he is a typical protagonist with a burning hate for the bad guys. As depressing as this was at the end, it's still a really awesome fic. Great job, and since it doesn't say 'complete' I'm wondering if you're going to continue. I really hope you do, this is the best story I've read in a while!

I think that this is a really good story. you should like make another chapter for this saying what cilan does next and happens to the rest of team plasma.

Oh my!

I actually liked this and I REALLY hope to see something like this in the anime. The GymLeaders/Shadowtriad theory will do SO MUCH good to the anime *3*

But, I think it was kinda rush, but I love it anyways. Specially the last part where Cilan ends all alone... It was... so sad ;A;

Hey that was really good! So if you're going to continue it do it soon please! It's a really good story

i had a dream like that once. and you should of said for zekroms sake.

NO CILAN YOU'RE NOT ALONE I STILL LOVE YOU EVEN IF YOU WERE ON TEAM PLASMA YOU'RE NOT ALONE!

CONTINUE :D

This is good! I liked it!