Even if its fictional it still has laws

Damn Gin. Your bitch got stolen by a pipsqueak!

Hmm

Best story ever

you know, i can't help but wonder how the people that had to clean that mess up felt when they heard the last people they'd had were a couple of shinigami, one tall, busty, and with orange-ish hair, the other being short, unassuming, and with white hair.

So... Fucking... Awesome.

Damn that is one badass story I hav to say

Amazing story, needs a sequel badly with same characters.

Loved it keep going

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!
THAT waz 1 of THE BEST lemon fanfictionz I have EVER red !

you should definitely do a bleach lemon chronicle like the Naruto one but add on to this one too. make rangiku and toshiro have a kid because of this one

You should. This was pretty good.

Nicely done it was well written and thats all I can say. I am a harsh critic on lemons and this was great but the sex was to long. People would probably ejaculate half way through the story then wait like an hour which would be quite annoying. Then read again and not feel the vibe. I'm not saying keep it short but think about how people might go before really good stuff happens. - dream

This gets better and better every time I read this. Only a few times did I force myself to actually read the whole thing before getting to the good part. Have you noticed how many people didn't actually sign in to post a review? xD I'm included.

Wow...is it weird that a shorty has that equipment?