I got to say, this is a really interesting story and I'm glad you came back to update it. I'll be waiting for your next update!

Quite amazing job.

Awwww...Bubs
Sigh
I dislike you at first because of the way you treat Blossom but now you're thawing my heart

Oh jeez, your writing is so good it actually made me cry.

woah! this chapter was amazing! okay, so, firstly, i loved the way you described the blizzard. that imagery was so. good. i really liked Bubbles' character development as well! not to mention Bubbles' and Brick's relationshipshe's like the sister he never had! the plotline is really well thought out, i love it, and your writing skills are amazing. thank you for the update, and i'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Gosh! My heart breaks for Boomer and Blossom :'(((((

It's great to see you active again! This was one of the earliest fanfics that I started reading, so super excited to get a notification for this! Hopefully everything in life is going well :)

And as for the review, still as wonderful as previous chapters, if not better. I find that you write Brick's anger, hatred, and frustration incredibly well. I could feel his heat radiating off him as I read! You have an affinity to writing the inner discourse within characters, something that I absolutely love seeing in stories.

I'm very curious how he will be handling Blossom in the near future, will he be able to set aside his anger so they can finally cooperate together, and plan to retake Townsville?

This chapter was so good. So much detail and I really liked blossoms and bonkers interactions. I hope buttercup and bubbles don’t get hurt in the simulator trying to help blossom. Hopefully we see more of butch and brick in the next chapter can’t wait!

Quite good work.

Quite good work.

I love this chapter! We got more insight on Brick and what he's thinking. Interesting to see how the insult that Buttercup said to Brick about "killing the old general" runs deeper than one would expect. I also never thought I would say this but Butch is kinda swoon worthy right now hahaha(the knight we didn't expect but the knight we deserve?lol). Definitely my favorite character in this story so far!

I AM SO RELIEVED THAT BRICK N BUBBLES IS NOT THE SHIP IN THIS FIC BECAUSE IM AN AVID RED FAN Plus I follow your Instagram so I kinda knew that but it still broke my heart! HAHAHAH

Anywho, love the story, hating brick rn, kinda lowkey hating bubs too? love love love butch n butters relationship w bloss! Boomer? I pity the guy

whereas Blossom...gosh that girl has been through so much sh*t, she doesnt deserve all the hate. hopefully a happy chapter will be prepared for our pink fave gal in the near future? heheh

cant wait for the next update! XOXO

Yes great chapter and you did really good with the fight scenes. It seems like brick might have a thing for blossom something a little more than hatred and poor boomer. I hope he realizes that Bubbles doesn’t like Brick that way. This was a nice and long detailed chapter. Can’t wait until the next update!

Great to see an updated chapter! I feel like I've been waiting for this my whole entire life XD I don't know what I was gonna expect, but I certainly wasn't expecting Butch and Brick fight like that. Good to know that Butch has Blossom's back. So Brick and Bubbles aren't really a thing? I kinda got that vibe that they were at the end of chapter 7 but can't say I'm not relieved to see it end.

Omg I have been waiting for this for so long, YESSSSS.