Man I just read this and seemed real promising, where you been.

I'm in love with this story and your writing style! Please do continue; there's never enough Tikku! My favorite part so far is when they were on the ship and Rikku jumped in bed with him. XD I personally have no problem with the untranslated Al Bhed (I actually downloaded the app and am having lots of fun with it :D) and I think it adds to the story. I can't wait to read more, so please please please update soon! *Favorited
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I look forward to seeing more from you! :)

Good.

Interesting pairing.

Pretty nice story so far, but I think things might be happening too fast between them than what realism would suggest. And Tidus as a playboy ? Why not after all he's supposed to be a star, but if you want some hard fluff, he could also admit muuuch later that he didn't do anything with them too D (As a Tidus/Rikku fan, I'd really find that great :p)

Anyway, glad to see that the FFX fanbase still exists out there, and there isn't nearly enough stories with the Tidus/Rikku pairing for my liking so I'm glad to see one that seems promising.

I hope you'll be updating soon, keep up the good work ;).

Story is great so far,but i was hoping for a different way of meeting Yuna wakka and Lulu

I really like this twisted version of the plotline. And the Tikku.

Keep up the great work!

nice work honestly i like this pairing better than the original you've managed to change the story noticeably but still kept enough of the original story line to make it good not an easy thing to do i look forward to reading the next chapter

im enjoying it so far, you are slightly changing the characters, i just hope you dont change their core personailites.

The story's great so far. It'll be interesting to see how the next chapter continues.
In my opinion the Tidus/Rikku pairing makes much more sense than Tidus/Yuna. Shame it wasn't the canon pairing.

Awesome story so far. I like this pairing, feels more fitting than canon one.

Really waiting to see more of this.

Really interested to see where you take this story, not too many choose to diverge from the original plot so quickly and even fewer do it well. This seems great so far and I can't wait to see what else you have in store

Well, so far so good. I can't find anything to complain about so you must be doing a lot of things right. I like where you are going with this as far as trying to keep to the story but change it at the same time. And I agree, it is hard to do with FFX or any video game really; especially one with such a rigid storyline. Feel free to bounce ideas off me if you ever have trouble, I honestly don't have much better to do with my time.

I look forward to your next chapter.

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BabLe7

Glad you are back... I like the differing from the actual story. Don't get me wrong, I love FFX bit different is always welcome. Rikku was my favorite character in FFX... keep it up.

Very good chapter. I always had the question of what would have happened if Tidus had not fallen of the albhed boat,anyways great work.

Good luck.