Am I the only one who ships Percabeth and Call hard and yet still thinks this is breathtakingly beautiful? and not to mention the wonderfully written 2nd person. you are a wonderful writer and I am so happy to find your account and read your stories.

I've never thought of a Leo/Annabeth, um... Leobeth. Nicely written

Love this pairing. Great job!

I'd never seen this pairing before. If she HAD accepted, I would love to see Percy's reaction. He would probably think it's a joke. Or not. Percy can be insecure. It would be OOC to accept. Shrugs.

Aww... Even though I LOVE Percy/Annabeth, this broke my heart. Poor Leo... The writing was amazing and the second person narration. Just wow. I've never seen anyone pull it off so seamlessly. I didn't even nitice. Usually when people write in second person, it's really disjointed and awkward to read, but yours just flowed. It's amazing. Your writing style is brilliant too.

LLLEEEEEEOOOOOOOO

Yeesh, Kelly, way to take my heart and run it through a paper shredder. Oh, Leo baby, c'mere, I'll love you.

On a more coherent note, this is amazing. It's really IC, which is refreshing, and I can totally see Leo pining after the Queen of Badass. (Maybe a leetle part of me ships Leobeth. Maybe.)

Absolutely wonderful!

I feel really bad for Leo. I mean, he always falls for the girls he can't have./3

I'm a Percabeth shipper, but I like this story!

ur fan fics are so sad...well most of them

(Wow, you just totally had me like crying...)

Poor Leo...

But Percabeth is key, my friend.

I really, really wish Leo had at least someone...

(Which I am totally not implying to be Reyna what?)

Dang you, Rick Trolliordan!

Okay, so to start off, this was really good. I haven't really seen one like this on this site so far and it's always good to have something new and original. I think it's pretty amazing that you can write in second person. I probably never will be able to. But I have noticed something. All of the fanfictions that I have read that are in second person are one-shots and they never have a happy ending. Which makes me sad. I thought that all the characters were all very IC, except that Leo was a little bit... too sensitive(for lack of a better word). Good job, all in all.

Well, I'm available. :)

I've decided that even though this pairing would be totally awesome, Leo and Jason were just meant to be. Seriously. (And Piper and Drew. Like, for real.)

(It's the chocolate withdrawal. Ignore me)

Wow. Just wow. This is probably one of my favorite fanfics! Keep up the amazing work!

Aww :)

I was skeptical at first, seeing that this is Leo/Annabeth. (which has a 99.99% chance of never happening) But it said one-sided, so I figured I'd try it.

I'm glad I did! I loved how you wrote it, and the whole format and wording. Leo does seem to fall often and fall hard for almost every girl he sees.

It's completely IC, because we all know Annabeth would never give up on Percy. Leo's disappointment was sad :(

Thanks for the one-shot!

~TwIx27

Interesting story! Personally, I usually stick with cannon, but the beginning made me want her to say yes. You are such a good writer! Maybe you could write something about how Leo finds his someone...? Anyways, please keep writing! :DD