Please update

I hope you'll continue this. It is really interesting.

Wow, this has started off pretty well
Is the 'Need' kinda like Dexter's? Like the homicidal serial killer Dexter

Umm.. I find this story interesting and Please Update Soon!
I wanna know what will happen next! :D

Please update soon! I've been on watch for this for nearly a year! Advice from one author to another, people will think you are dead if you don't update a story for a very long time, I know, it's happened to me before. Now I update at least once a month if not I tell them why I haven't updated so people don't freak again. Don't let this happen to you!

Interesting start. I knew that slimy teacher was up to something. ;)

I love the amount of detail you placed into this story! It's really suspenseful~ you leave me wanting for more :

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Pfft. I need a bleeding FFnet account.

But haha it's been sometime since I reviewed to anyone's fics. Time to stop lurking and start reviewing!

This is probably one of the first times I'm reading your fics? I'm not entirely sure, but I've fallen in love with your writing style, definitely XD I love how the style is refreshing (goodness, what have I been reading?) and the words you use manage to put very precise imagery in my head. There's also the way that you weave in characters without actually rushing to reveal their relationship, like 'Kyoya' (it implies a lot 'D) and Nezu himself; it casts Tsuna in a sort of mysterious air? Cielo really adds to the whole impression, too.

Another flawless dive into the next character: Giotto's appearance was a pleasant surprise! I don't know, but I'm just excited to see him in here, as well as of his guardians. I'm probably biased, though, what with having a thing for Giotto and Tsuna on the same fanfic page often setting me off- er, before I get sidetracked 'D We dive straight into the heart of the plot itself- Reborn. I admit that I didn't actually put much thought into figuring out who the person of the phone was (until some point of time where my mind went "LOL no one speaks to Giotto like that" and "the only one who can- oh.") but I like how we can all hear Reborn's snark and character glowering out from the phone- Reborn's awesome like that.

Overall, I just really think that your characterization is spot on; it's pretty amazing, not many authors can pull this off so wonderfully.

There's a lot of juicy hinting in this chapter, haha, and we're all hanging off every word that tells us more about dear Tsuna. I'm inclined to dramatically yell, 'The plot thickens!' And run off but yes, well. 'D (Speaking of fanfiction I need to go stalk your profile hoho. I simply must.) Thank you for the great read, I hope to see the next chapter soon!

Write on!

-Mem

To be honest, I don't know what and how to review... but I'll try my best!

Let's see, huh... ah yes, I think I'll love your Tsuna! Of course, I'm already fond of our lovable clumsy idiot we know all but I think your Tsuna is a nice change from the one I'm used to. Giotto's presence was unexpected though, not that was a bad thing. It give a good twist in your story, in fact. And, ah, Dino, hahaha, even if he was just mentioned and not appearing in this chapter, he knows how to give a good laugh, pffft. A point of humour doesn't hurt, even if this fic is dark.

I cannot wait for Tsuna's interactions with the other characters~

Have a nice day!

Very interesting start.

Ooh, gory. So tsuna has some issues...?

Wao... I really like this! Tsuna is so cool! Thanks! Plz updat soon!

BOO! Miss me? Haha anyway, though I majorly blew my test in Organic Chemistry, I'm wallowing in self-pity and realized "Hey, Sunny will kill me for not reading her fic." So here I am haha XD

Nyway, well, for starters. WHERE THE HELL DID MY LOVABLE TUNA GO? H-He's crueeeeeeel1! Am sad but it's kind of interesting so don't bother with my rant and I do spot Gary Stu wahahaha tsk tsk, there it goes, Sunny-dear. And man...Tsuna's damn merciless.

Well, I know you have a beta and such but you really do like run-on sentences no? Got dopey eyed with Tsuna's rant in baiting Nezu haha not used to it and well, it's kind of off-putting? But don't mind me, it's just me anyway haha. Also, you're a bit strict with yourself when it comes to adjectives and adverbs so yeah like for example: 'He docilely obeyed.' It could be, 'He obeyed docilely.' Sometimes it gives a different rhythm. Right, you have lotsa commas and I barely see semi-colons so yeah the run-on sentences again. I learned a lot from you and well haha just thought I'd give some of mine?

And yezzzzzzzzz this story is kind of cool and GIOTTO IS FUCKIN' HERE! WEEEEEEEEEE! SO my bias is showing again. Shoot me. :P

Hey, I recommended that music! XD

Anyway, great story. Oh heck. Though I don't read stories of this genre. Genuinely creepy, but fitting for the Mafia setting. Lol. And the way Giotto explained how long he had lived is so creepy. XD.

Anyway, I should push for the new fic as well. Wait for it! XD!

~Kanojo wa Rinko

This is very awesome! I thank your friends who helped you evolve this! It would have been sad if this wasn't publish! I strangely find this Tsuna attractive!