Unexpecting turn of events. Who would have thought that Ichigo and Hichigo would be sharing the same body and that Rukia would accept such a thing. You wrote it very well with a clear idea in mind and it worked wonderfully. Quite interesting Rukia and Hichigo story so keep up the great work!

That was awesomely sexy. xD

I want you to please continue

I'm not a huge fan of rukia and hichigo but I really liked it. I hope you write more stories like this one.

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I freakin' LOVED IT! XD (bet ya' saw that comin'. *cackles)

That was brilliant! Ya' may say it just came outta know where on ya', but those are usually the best fic's/one-shots out there.

An' this, went beyond that.

Ya' painted a rather nice an' clear picture for the reader. An' I feel if both Ichi an' Rukia turned to the darker of traits, then they were totally in character for this fic'. *grins*

I also thought ya' played out Ichi an' my boy Hichi pretty damn well, as well! *sighs all dreamy like* Ya' just made me love him a lil' more then I already do. XD

Adored the idea of the dogs. Clever. Haha.

Also, I kinda figured that both Ichi an' Hichi came to an agreement to...share. *cackles* So, I caught on to that pretty quick. Your A/N just confirmed it for me at the end.

Any way, now look what you've done! HAHA! Now I gotta keep tabs on ya' just in case ya' pitch somethin' else that's brilliant out. XD

Oh, an' one more thing...I feel so honored that ya' would hunt me down to let me know! Thank you for that! It totally surprised me that ya' did that. An' as ya' can tell I jumped it as soon as I finished your message. *grins*

Aight, well, once more, excellent job! Keep up the goodness, yo!

DH

I actually like it! Dark and disturbing, a well written. I was thinking Rukia is also a combine of RUkia and DarkRukia (from the movie), both characters and the dark world are intriguing, I hope you do consider continuing this, not necessary as a on going plot series, but as a one/two shot chapters. Anyways good job!

I really liked it!

the way you described everything was amazing(:

update?

shiroxrukia so bloody, and sensual:P