This made me sad. What a nasty and selfish character Sasuke is, both here and in the manga/anime. I could just imagine him doing this sort of thing if he was to marry Sakura.

So dark and tragic. Ugh, I hate Sasuke more and more. ~_~;

Just beautiful.

What gets me is that in the manga, Sakura is still hooked on Sasuke! It's astonishing.

I liked your story, Troll. You get the impression that Sasuke, deep down, still feels outclassed by his former sensei . . . in more than one regard.